- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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- Nominated by: Jinzler 22:44, May 2, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: A Wookiee Force ghost
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- Strike me down! I'll become more... Oh, I don't speak Basic. ~Savage
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Just one: Can you find a synonym for "artifact" for one or two of its occurrences in the intro? Its repetition kinda jumped out at me. Maybe "statue," or even "Hand?"- Done --Jinzler 21:24, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
And one that's more of a question, as I'm not familiar with The Living Force --- why does the assumed path in the bio stop where it does, rather than going the whole mile by having the Wyrd defeated and Chywarra enroll at the Almas Academy?- When making use of the "RPG" and "Endgame" templates, my general approach is to try and reflect the "default" path that the player characters would take in the absence of any specific factors. The source makes clear that possibility of Chywarra enrolling at the Almas Academy isn't certain and it presents that specific possibility as merely a suggestion of something that the players can cause to happen. However, at the same time, the article would probably flow better if the information was presented in the "Biography" section, with a corresponding BTS note. The "RPG" template does allow the flexibility to do that, so I am happy to transfer the information to the bio if need be. Which treatment do you advise? --Jinzler 21:24, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
- I wish I had any sort of experience with the RPG template, but I don't think that I can offer any sort of expert opinion. If his enrollment at the Almas Academy is just kind of suggested as something that the players can do if they want, then I think that what you have right now is good. I would just suggest wording the bts to explicitly state that it's presented as a suggestion and that it isn't certain, similar to what you just told me above. Menkooroo 04:38, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
- Done --Jinzler 11:32, May 15, 2011 (UTC)
- I wish I had any sort of experience with the RPG template, but I don't think that I can offer any sort of expert opinion. If his enrollment at the Almas Academy is just kind of suggested as something that the players can do if they want, then I think that what you have right now is good. I would just suggest wording the bts to explicitly state that it's presented as a suggestion and that it isn't certain, similar to what you just told me above. Menkooroo 04:38, May 11, 2011 (UTC)
- When making use of the "RPG" and "Endgame" templates, my general approach is to try and reflect the "default" path that the player characters would take in the absence of any specific factors. The source makes clear that possibility of Chywarra enrolling at the Almas Academy isn't certain and it presents that specific possibility as merely a suggestion of something that the players can cause to happen. However, at the same time, the article would probably flow better if the information was presented in the "Biography" section, with a corresponding BTS note. The "RPG" template does allow the flexibility to do that, so I am happy to transfer the information to the bio if need be. Which treatment do you advise? --Jinzler 21:24, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
- That's all. Excellent work --- you are the Living Force, Jinzler. Menkooroo 14:37, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for your praise and your review. They are appreciated. --Jinzler 21:24, May 10, 2011 (UTC)
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Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 10:55, May 21, 2011 (UTC)