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Renz
- Nominated by: Ayrehead02 (talk) 10:07, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: I really did not expect this to end up on the FAN but Barrie Holland apparently has a lot of stories to tell.
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- Great work. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:26, 20 August 2021 (UTC)
OOM 224 21:08, 2 November 2021 (UTC)- Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 09:41, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
- UberSoldat93
(talk) 13:56, 30 January 2022 (UTC) - Very nice! LucaRoR
(Talk) 14:58, 30 January 2022 (UTC) - MasterFred(talk) 01:51, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
- Great work Ayre. DarthRuiz30 (talk) 02:21, 31 January 2022 (UTC)
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Macaroni
Is it really necessary to include the "Ha! Ha!" in the bts quote? It doesn't really add much in my opinion.- Eh I usually include that kind of thing as part of the whole quote, but removed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Should we be listing the OT/PT graphic novels by the first movie they adapt in appearances per Forum:CT:Clarifying the Appearances section in the Layout Guide?- I don't think we have a consistent precedent on this, but done. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
"so that Solo turned into Renz's gun" -- this implies that Solo literally transformed into a gun, which is not what I think you're trying to say.- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Endor Limited is missing a release year, and it was not produced by WotC :P- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Can you please give the series name and full release date for the De Agostini book?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:06, 11 August 2021 (UTC)- Damn, I generally just auto-assume De Agostini full dates are impossible, I forgot that Encyclopedia actually has them. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:26, 11 August 2021 (UTC)
Do we have/need a page for the Endor bunker garrison?- Made one, although the precedent for when a garrison does or doesn't get a page seems a little spotty. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
Is the capitalization of Rebel in the opening quote accurate?- Changed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
The "Duped by Solo" quote caption doesn't make it clear who the second speaker is.- Fixed. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
Do you think a year for Eye of the Needle is worth adding?JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:00, 17 August 2021 (UTC)- I left it out mostly because I don't really see how the year is relevant to the character Renz, all we need to know is that Holland and Marquand met on the film prior to Holland being offered Renz which is clear in the text. Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:43, 17 August 2021 (UTC)
Manoof
Capturing Rebels- can the first part of the sentence be referenced to Jedi as well as the point of his superior? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- Moved the reference. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
A Great Line - In the quote, please note [sic] at the start with the grammatical error Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Can you note that the role was not credited? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- Added. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
In "A complicated scene", Holland notes he believes his portrayal of Renz to be "a forceful officer whose ruthless manner summed up the power of the Empire.". Can we incorporate any of that in the P&T based on the character's behaviour, perhaps speaking to his dedication and loyalty to the empire? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- I'd rather leave the actors interpretation in the BTS and avoid trying to extrapolate stuff for the P&T from it. Since he only has one line I don't think we can really say much more that what's currently there. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Is Category:Endorians adequate here? Manoof (he/him/his) (talk) 12:22, 4 November 2021 (UTC)- I don't think being stationed on Endor is really enough to count him as an Endorian, and for all we know he shipped out to sleep on the Death Star every night or something. Ayrehead02 (talk) 18:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
UberSoldat
The film provides no indication that Dyer was killed; we only see him fall over a railing.UberSoldat93 (talk) 20:10, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- Huh, I'd never considered he might survive falling into the generator but I guess it's possible. Ayrehead02 (talk) 22:43, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 02:36, 31 January 2022 (UTC)