- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
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- Nominated by: Imperialles 05:50, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Well written article by Fourdot.
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Marvel UK! Xicer9(Combadge) 01:44, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 06:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 23:47, August 25, 2010 (UTC)
Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 15:22, August 26, 2010 (UTC)
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Xicer
Psychic killer: "...the Star Destroyer's captain, Dirk Balor, deployed TIE/ln starfighters to the bridge." He deployed TIEs to the bridge? Huh?- Fixed.
Bts: "The character was also going to be profiled in the article Supernatural Encounters in the Star Wars Universe, by Joe Bongiorno, which was meant to be published in Star Wars Gamer before the magazine was ultimately canceled." Source?- Added.
Any chance of getting those two images rescanned? At the very least they could be cropped better, since the borders are visible. Another image wouldn't hurt either, preferably one showing him with the lead hood and bubble.- I'm not entirely sure where we're going to get them scanned from, since the comic hasn't been reprinted anywhere recently, as far as I'm aware. The second image has been replaced, though.
I currently count four redlinks, at least one needs to be killed.That's all. Xicer9(Combadge) 21:46, July 11, 2010 (UTC)
- Done. Thanks for the review. Thefourdotelipsis 01:03, July 13, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
Death of the Nightmare Demon: "The Nightmare Demon fell from Skywalker's chest, out of the X-wing, and hit the Lapez-3 surface." I assume this means they never actually left the X-wing's cockpit? The visions make it sound like Luke's moving around so this should probably be made clear.- Fixed, hopefully. Added a sentence earlier.
- No objections here but just to let you know, I changed the quote attribution in "Psychic killer" to match the image. Change back if not correct. I also moved the last sentence of the intro's first paragraph to the start of the next one as the second follows on from that. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:42, July 29, 2010 (UTC)
- That seems fine. Thanks. Thefourdotelipsis 04:25, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:22, August 26, 2010 (UTC)