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Reginald Barkbone
- Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 18:03, July 23, 2010 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)
Support
- This guy's weird.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 04:57, July 24, 2010 (UTC)
Excellent; Ackbar's back and there's gonna be trouble...—Tommy 9281 21:08, July 27, 2010 (UTC)- YARRR! QuiGonJinn
(Talk) 19:45, July 28, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:40, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
Nice to see another quality Ackbar nom --Eyrezer 12:12, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
— Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 01:37, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:46, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Object
Green Tentacle
Context for Seven Sectors. From clicking the link, I guess this isn't entirely possible but you can probably mention that the sectors are unknown, either to Tigellinus or in the BTS.- Added that Tigellinus didn't know them in the bio.
Could also use some brief context for Lok Pirate's Cant. Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:20, August 2, 2010 (UTC)- Done that too for the bio. Thanks for the review! -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 15:24, August 7, 2010 (UTC)
Jujiggum
Does the source actually use the elipses in the opening quote? If so, then it's fine, but if not, then the elipses should be enclosed like so: […]- Added square brackets.
Do we know for sure whether Barkbone went insane, or is this just Tigellinus' speculation? The bio and intro make it sound for sure like Barkbone lost his sanity, but in the P&T you say only that Tigellinus questioned his sanity.- Clarified.
I'd also suggest that you go through the article once and make sure that none of the links are redirects—I caught a few in my copyedit, but it might be a good idea to double-check for good measure.- I cleaned up all the other redirects. --Eyrezer 12:13, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
- That's all I've got. Fine work. Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 02:02, August 9, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you very much, and thanks for the review. Sorry about the delay in getting to these. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:48, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
- No problem. :) Jonjedigrandmaster (Talk) 17:46, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you very much, and thanks for the review. Sorry about the delay in getting to these. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 10:48, August 18, 2010 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 17:46, August 18, 2010 (UTC)