Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ranik Solusar

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Ranik Solusar

Read it as a GAN, and all that jazz. Xicer9^(Combadge) 01:19, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
Indeed. Graestan^(Talk) 02:02, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
Imperialles 14:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)
GAN-reviewed. Jonjedigrandmaster ^(Talk) 22:31, June 14, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 14:16, June 16, 2010 (UTC)
I read it on the GAN. JangFett ^(Talk) 07:49, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

The Purge: "Kam was later swayed into the service of the Empire, although he was liberated many years later" "Liberate" seems a bit Rebel POV, wouldn't you say? I'm sure there's some slightly more neutral alternative.

In the intro you refer to Cavik Toth as an agent, but in the body you say he's an ally. Which is it? Agent implies a closer relationship, no? I'm not sure, really, so if you could either explain or keep the wording consistent, that would be great.
Good work as always. --Imperialles 11:26, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

~~Why no images? One of his son would be appropriate. --Eyrezer 06:45, June 12, 2010 (UTC)~~
- Got one in there now. Thefourdotelipsis 03:56, June 13, 2010 (UTC)
  - Is that the best image you could find? He does look young, but perhaps a crop to the waist is in order. Anyway, objection struck. --Eyrezer 10:33, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

~~Clone Wars: "Solusar and his compatriots continued battle Toth's forces." Missing word?~~
- Fixed.
Behind the scenes: "Originally, Solusar would have first been referenced in Tom Veitch's Lightsider story, although the product was later canceled." If this wasn't released then it's not self-sourcing and a source needs to be provided. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 19:37, June 15, 2010 (UTC)
- Since I'm not totally sure as to what is kosher in this instance, I've just removed the sentence outright. Thefourdotelipsis 00:30, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:28, June 19, 2010 (UTC)