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Rango Tel
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Support
- Something something.
Thefourdotelipsis 08:28, 9 August 2007 (UTC) - What an idiot. Green Tentacle (Talk) 11:15, 13 August 2007 (UTC)
- This guy was pretty stupid. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 14:10, 16 August 2007 (UTC) - BLARG! -- Darth Culator (Talk) 03:25, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- Err, interesting character to say the least. Greyman(Paratus) 17:36, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
- Poor guy. -- Ozzel 19:24, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
Oppose
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
". . . with the Pa'lowick smuggler Aneesa Dym at his side, he sought to find and kill Kam Nale for local crime lord."— I think a word is missing near the end. (Intro)- Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
I question the use of the second paragraph in the intro. It reads like a P&T section.- Introducing you to the P & T seen later on. It's legit. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Bah! It's odious to me, but that's personal preference. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 14:14, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Bah! It's odious to me, but that's personal preference. Atarumaster88
- Introducing you to the P & T seen later on. It's legit. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Second sentence in the "Hunt for Kam Nale" could be reworded to make more sense.- Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Is Nale a Fluggian or a FluggRian?- Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Original research in P&T. Canon only, please. (2nd sentence)- It's canon. "His fate changed, however, when as a young man drawn into a cantina brawl, he was able to inadvertently score a bounty on his drunken foe. With the sizable bounty collected, Tel paid for off-planet passage, and used the rest to jumpstart what he thought was his calling: his new bounty hunting career." Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, but saying he doesn't believe in coincidence at all is a rather long jump to Conclusions-ooine. Saying that he decided his career on a whim or on happenstance is fine. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 14:14, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:59, 16 August 2007 (UTC)
- Yes, but saying he doesn't believe in coincidence at all is a rather long jump to Conclusions-ooine. Saying that he decided his career on a whim or on happenstance is fine. Atarumaster88
- It's canon. "His fate changed, however, when as a young man drawn into a cantina brawl, he was able to inadvertently score a bounty on his drunken foe. With the sizable bounty collected, Tel paid for off-planet passage, and used the rest to jumpstart what he thought was his calling: his new bounty hunting career." Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
Pronouns/objects in Relationships could use some tweaking to make them clearer.- Fixed, I suppose. Thefourdotelipsis 08:36, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 01:45, 15 August 2007 (UTC)
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