Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Rahm Kota/Legends

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Rahm Kota

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 01:48, January 23, 2010 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Finally done! Special thanks to QuiGonJinn for supplying detailed Elite Squadron info, and Toprawa and Ralltiir for giving it the once over for me. Read it before TFU II screws with it!

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Has earned the Toprawa Stamp of Approval. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:46, January 24, 2010 (UTC)
2. Nice job. Hopefully he won't have a big role in TFU II. :p Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:48, January 24, 2010 (UTC)
3. Kota's awesome. Great job, Cav.--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 15:28, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
4. Woah. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 16:44, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
5. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 18:44, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
6. Fantastic work. Jonjedigrandmaster ^{(Jedi Beacon)} 19:49, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
7. Because something on this page needs to pass in less than a week. CC7567 ^(talk) 00:22, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Object

1. Clone's picky stuff
   • Can you clarify the senator/Senator capitalization inconsistencies throughout the article? I'd recommend picking one and sticking with it.
     • It needs to be checked against and follow the Manual of Style, not necessarily be "consistent" throughout the article; sorry for the confusion. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:18, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
       • No problems; I've amended a few instances where Senator should be decapitalised.
   • "since an unknown quantity made him a military threat": can this be reworded at all to avoid the OOU perspective?
     • There is no OOU perspective. The apprentice was, to Bel Iblis, an "unknown quantity" as in this definition. I've rewritten for quality, but the phrase "unknown quantity" remains.
   • Stopping there just because of time constraints. Will continue with "Forging an Alliance" ASAP. CC7567 ^(talk) 22:25, January 25, 2010 (UTC)
   • "The apprentice was surprised at his appearance, commenting that he thought Kota had been passed out in the cargo hold of the Rogue Shadow." Do you mean just "passed out," i.e. resting or unconscious?
     • Passed out drunk. Added a small clarification.
   • That's it. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:18, January 26, 2010 (UTC)
     • Thanks for the review. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:18, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 03:17, January 30, 2010 (UTC)