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Quork
- Nominated by: ~Savage
18:21, March 18, 2012 (UTC) - Nomination comments: A GA from back when I didn't realize that articles with only one real source could be FAs. Time to upgrade! ~Savage
18:21, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
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- Just fixed some cases of multiple linking, and decided to individually link Forest Moon of Endor. Note that stuff such as Endor's should never be pipelinked. Hanzo Hasashi 19:51, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's an older GA, so a facelift doesn't hurt. I've seen both [[Tree/Legends|Forest]] [[Moon/Legends|Moon]] of [[Endor/Legends|Endor]] and [[Endor/Legends|Forest Moon]] of [[Endor (planet)/Legends|Endor]] used and reverts back and forth between the two, so I'm not sure which is en vogue at the moment, so we'll see. Thanks for the review! ~Savage
20:19, March 18, 2012 (UTC)
- Yeah, it's an older GA, so a facelift doesn't hurt. I've seen both [[Tree/Legends|Forest]] [[Moon/Legends|Moon]] of [[Endor/Legends|Endor]] and [[Endor/Legends|Forest Moon]] of [[Endor (planet)/Legends|Endor]] used and reverts back and forth between the two, so I'm not sure which is en vogue at the moment, so we'll see. Thanks for the review! ~Savage
—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 01:41, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 01:19, March 31, 2012 (UTC)- Plagueis327 19:12, April 4, 2012 (UTC)
We need to showcase as much madness from these comics as we possibly can. Menkooroo 02:49, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
If only for the advanced Ewok technology bit. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:59, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
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Return of the Jedi
Just a couple things: For ref 5, I'd like to see a CSWECite. It would be good to see that changed for the Sources, as well.Ref 11 is a bit confusing. You mention a "Page 10," but a page 10 of what?- There were several formatting issues in the article that were probably left over from its original older nomination. You may want to take a look at the changes I made. Otherwise, nice work.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 02:55, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
- Righteo. All should be addressed, and thanks very much for the copy edit. One note: I've changed back to simple <ref></ref> tags for the refs that are only listed once, since the <refname> tags seem superfluous to me in such situations. I really do appreciate the review, so please let me know if anything else requires attention. :) ~Savage
16:06, March 25, 2012 (UTC)
- Since policy currently allows the "ref" tags instead of the "ref name" tags, you're obviously free to change them back. However, you may want to use the "ref name" ones, since that is what is more commonly used now-a-days. Up to you, though. Good article.—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 01:41, March 26, 2012 (UTC)
- Since policy currently allows the "ref" tags instead of the "ref name" tags, you're obviously free to change them back. However, you may want to use the "ref name" ones, since that is what is more commonly used now-a-days. Up to you, though. Good article.—Cal Jedi
- Righteo. All should be addressed, and thanks very much for the copy edit. One note: I've changed back to simple <ref></ref> tags for the refs that are only listed once, since the <refname> tags seem superfluous to me in such situations. I really do appreciate the review, so please let me know if anything else requires attention. :) ~Savage
Question...
Does the timeline in Behind the Magic mention the Ewoks comics, or just the TV show and movies? If the latter, is there any evidence to suggest that the comics are definitely in 3.5 ABY? If so, an explanatory ref is probably needed.Menkooroo 02:37, April 23, 2012 (UTC)- It's not mentioned, but Wicket and Teebo clearly are based on their counterparts in the cartoon, and the Duloks are all identical from one source to the next. I've added a bit if info to a foot note; see what you think. And thanks for taking a look! ~Savage
02:45, April 23, 2012 (UTC)
- It's not mentioned, but Wicket and Teebo clearly are based on their counterparts in the cartoon, and the Duloks are all identical from one source to the next. I've added a bit if info to a foot note; see what you think. And thanks for taking a look! ~Savage
Green Tentacle
Continuing Menkooroo's question: Behind the Magic's timeline places the rescue of the Towani's and the death of King Terak around 3.5 ABY. I can't see any mention of the cartoons. Did I miss something?Any reason Kneesaa is referred to throughout by her first name? (Same goes for a lot of other FAs.)Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:53, May 12, 2012 (UTC)- The cartoon's listed! Go to Disc 2, "Expanded Universe," "Timeline," and then scroll down. You'll see it at 3.5 ABY. I've fixed the Kneesaa thing, although I'm not sure if the full last name is "a Jari Kintaka" or just "Kintaka." Thanks for looking over a silly article. :) ~Savage
15:28, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
- Never even found that bit! Thanks. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:59, May 12, 2012 (UTC)
- The cartoon's listed! Go to Disc 2, "Expanded Universe," "Timeline," and then scroll down. You'll see it at 3.5 ABY. I've fixed the Kneesaa thing, although I'm not sure if the full last name is "a Jari Kintaka" or just "Kintaka." Thanks for looking over a silly article. :) ~Savage
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:59, May 12, 2012 (UTC)