- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Quille
- Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner
(Comlink) 22:47, September 20, 2009 (UTC) - Nomination comments: Had a good comment, but I forgot it. Oh well. Just pretend I came up with something funny to say.
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Support
IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 00:34, October 5, 2009 (UTC)- Jedi Kasra (comlink) 14:13, November 2, 2009 (UTC)
- CC7567 (talk) 02:01, November 27, 2009 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 00:19, December 4, 2009 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:51, January 3, 2010 (UTC)
- —Tommy9281 (No truth in me) 06:18, January 5, 2010 (UTC)
Object
- IFYLOFD
In the intro, mention that Caedus is a Sith Lord the first time you mention him.- Done.
"After Pellaeon and the Moffs, including Pellaeon's ally Drikl Lecersen" Does it really merit mention in the intro that Lecersen was at the meeting?- Nope. Removed.
"As the meeting commenced, Quille revealed the proposal to his fellow Moffs, proving Pellaeon's theory that the Grand Moff was in possession of the offer." Expand on this. Why would Pellaeon suspect Quille knew of the offer?- Revelation doesn't really elaborate on it. Pellaeon just mentions that he wouldn't be surprised if some of the Moffs knew of the offer, and then he and Lecersen glance at Quille.
- That's it. Well done. IFYLOFD (You will pay the price for your lack of vision!) 23:46, October 3, 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Floyd. Grand Moff Tranner (Comlink) 01:42, October 4, 2009 (UTC)
- Thanks, Floyd. Grand Moff Tranner
Comments
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 06:18, January 5, 2010 (UTC)