Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Port in a Storm

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Port in a Storm

• Nominated by: —spookywilloww^talk 03:30, 26 July 2024 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: FGA due to updates pushing it over, did say I'd tow it back up at some point afterward after a proper cleanup run in the GAR. Always good to have them maintain status; and besides, it does have a nice Master & Apprentice tie-in. It is admittedly a bit out of my normal scope in terms of source wrangling though…
• Date Archived: 00:31, 26 November 2024 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1053 words (107 introduction, 793 body, 153 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1046 words (107 introduction, 787 body, 152 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:THRWP:ENTWP:GE

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Support

1. Lewisr (talk) 21:10, 2 September 2024 (UTC)
2. Wok142 (talk) 22:34, 7 September 2024 (UTC)
3. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 20:13, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
4. The most hungover I've ever been was from fortified wine. This shit is no joke. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 17:13, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
5. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 23:47, 24 November 2024 (UTC)
6. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 00:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC)

Object

Wok

• I feel as though "sweet-tasting" does not belong in the Physical description section. Wok142 (talk) 05:16, 4 September 2024 (UTC)
  • Removed.—spookywilloww^talk 20:58, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

OOM

• Can we assume that this is found on Pijal as the infobox claims? The article body doesn't seem to say that Port in a Storm can necessarily be found on Pijal, while the bit in the intro where it lists all the worlds feels like it's just omitting Pijal. OOM 224 (he/him/they) 17:24, 14 September 2024 (UTC)
  • It's kinda borderline but erred to caution; removed.—spookywilloww^talk 18:56, 14 September 2024 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Appearances section needs to align with the newly-passed audiobook CT. Master Fredcerique(talk) (he/him) 05:29, 10 October 2024 (UTC)
  • Sorted.—spookywilloww^talk 19:12, 10 October 2024 (UTC)

Tommy

• The lead quote's caption is slightly confusing. Proof of what? I'd recommend changing it to "A tavern-keeper on Pamarthe uses a Port in a Storm to confirm whether Joph Seastriker and Greer Sonnel are Pamarthen(s)" or something along those lines.
• "Port in a Storm was kept in a tall, clear tube on the counter behind the club's central bar." - shouldn't this be sourced to How Not to Get Eaten by Ewoks and Other Galactic Survival Skills instead of the film?
• Do you think it would be appropriate to pipelink "annual" to standard year at the start of A woman of Pamarthe?
  • Sorted three above.—spookywilloww^talk 16:27, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
• "Greer Sonnel, a native Pamarthen, drank Port in a Storm with ease." - based on the body, this isn't entirely true, as Sonnel did experience negative side effects.
  • Hmm. It's still true most of the time, so tweaked to be usually.—spookywilloww^talk 16:27, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
    • Excellent use of "imbibe." Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 17:13, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
• There's precedent where if a sourcebook is reprinted and referenced information is present in both editions, the most modern version should be used in references. As such, the references to Ultimate Star Wars, New Edition should be replaced with the more recent Encyclopedia, if the information is indeed carried over. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 14:44, 23 November 2024 (UTC)
  • Swapped.—spookywilloww^talk 16:27, 23 November 2024 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 00:30, 26 November 2024 (UTC)