Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Petyr

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Petyr

  • Nominated by: OOM 224 (he/him) 10:20, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Petyr the Great brings you spoilers for Dark Droids! A neat little (~1300 words) article that outlines the saga of the Scourge. Also, I love mouse droids!
  • Date Archived: 16:00, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1355 words (183 introduction, 1054 body, 118 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1335 words (178 introduction, 1039 body, 118 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 19:17, 26 January 2024 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 19:09, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote I would die for Petyr. Also, I love it when Star Wars gets a little cooky. Master FredceriqueCommerce Guild(talk) (he/him) 03:58, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 11:50, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 12:50, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
  6. So cute.Booply (talk) 15:55, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Object

Editor
  • We should not put "possession" as a death equivalent in the infobox. In addition to it not killing you, it would imply like C-3PO, Lobot and Magna Tolvan would be listed as dead via possession when that is not the case.
  • You should note that, with the Scourge's destruction, all infected droids were freed. Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:26, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
    • Ooh, good points. Both done. OOM 224 (he/him) 08:58, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Unless I'm missing it, not seeing R2-D2's pronouns in DD issue 5 (though they are sourceable to issue 2). But in case I did miss it, didn't want to introduce a ref so figured I'd leave it as a point here.—spookywillowwtalk 02:15, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks, yeah issue 5 doesn't seem to give Artoo's pronouns, but the sentence was a bit wordy anyway so I've shortened it and removed the need to use pronouns. OOM 224 (he/him) 13:22, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
Lew
  • The 3rd issue doesn't identify Mustafar as a planet Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
  • The language for mouse droids beeps is Cruly-3 which can be noted with the name cited to the by the numbers video like Ketwol Lewisr (talk) 00:58, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
    • Oooh, didn't know that. Added! OOM 224 (he/him) 16:29, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
      • Thanks! Lewisr (talk) 19:09, 29 January 2024 (UTC)
Tommy
  • Nice work. A couple of things, I think some context for Second Revelation and the Scourge could be used in the intro. I have no familiarity with these groups so I think that'd be helpful, especially since I assumed "the Scourge" was a group not an individual. I'd say context for these would be more warranted than for, say, Vader.
  • I think some more context for the Scourge could be given in the body too tbh.
  • Would data probe and knife be worth sub-bulleting under "four arms" in the infobox?
  • On my screen, the second image in the vector section is interfering with the heading below, even with the sidebar.
  • "good soul by Ajax Sigma, and the crusader rushed" - this kinda suggests the crusader in question is Sigma, when I assume you're referring to Petyr. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 17:29, 20 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Thanks! Context added and sentence (last point) amended. I was conscious of infobox bloat, but I guess it's better to list the knife under Equipment rather than labelling as a weapon anyway. Re-shuffled the middle two images as well so they should display nicely regardless of device or either default or expanded view. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:22, 21 April 2024 (UTC)
Uber
  • Would like to see the manufacturer and length references split and handled in a similar way to ship and clone status articles. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 11:52, 22 April 2024 (UTC)
    • Updated, thanks OOM 224 (he/him) 12:47, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Comments

  • You're all going to hate me, but I have to ask it. Where was it confirmed that Petyr is the mouse droid seen in issue three? Editoronthewiki (talk) 16:24, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
    • How did i never notice the little mark and cracks on his body before Editoronthewiki (talk) 19:54, 30 December 2023 (UTC)
      • Heh, now that you mention it, I've had the article detail the dents and cracks on his body as well. OOM 224 (he/him) 09:03, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
        • Maybe it doesn't matter, but you could also mention the little gray mark on one of his triangle indents, as seen in infobox image Editoronthewiki (talk) 21:29, 31 December 2023 (UTC)
          • Ooh yeah. That mark is consistent across the comics too. OOM 224 (he/him) 11:08, 1 January 2024 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:58, 22 April 2024 (UTC)