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PD-28

  • Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 01:42, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 🐐
  • Date Archived: 15:28, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1375 words (266 introduction, 1082 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • Word count at nomination time: 1393 words (270 introduction, 1096 body, 27 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:Ewoks

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

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Support

  1. Inqvote You gotta love this little droid! LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 15:36, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote —spookywillowwtalk 02:32, 22 March 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 05:03, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote I read this a while ago and forgot to vote Commander Code-8 Hello There! 14:48, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
  5. UberSoldat93 ClanMudhornSignet-Redemption (talk) 10:39, 3 July 2023 (UTC)
  6. Panther436 (talk) 02:50, 13 July 2023 (UTC)

Object

Luca
  • I'd say his original master can go in affiliation in the infobox.
    • Added.
  • Sensor color is info box-exclusive.
    • Good catch, done.
  • "… but it was not a normal exit and was instead a shuttle pod." For extra clarity, I'd specify that they got into the shuttle pod because this remains unclear until a few lines later.
    • Added.
  • Does this "larger Imperial droid" deserve an individual page?
    • It's the same as the Imperial droid linked earlier. (Yes, I need to move its page so that it's more clearly a conjectural title.)
  • Very minor, but you re-introduce Knees with her full name in "Characteristics." Is there a particular reason for that?
    • Eh not really, removed.
  • The first paragraph under "Going after Raygar" is rather large (203 words): how would you feel about splitting it?
    • Good call, done.
  • In the intro, it is a bit weird that you introduce the names of the 4 Ewoks only in the last paragraph. I'd move the list of the names upon the first mention of the young Ewoks. LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 20:08, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
    • Moved.
  • (Review note) Make sure to be ok with my copy-edit :) LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 20:10, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
    • I don't think hungry really needs to be linked to diet, but otherwise yeah, thanks. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 20:20, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
  • Imagecat is missing.
  • It would be nice to have another image, maybe under "Going after Raygar." LucaRoR Sigil of House Serenno (Talk) 14:21, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
spookly
  • Pronouns update (I've snuck in a blank field in my copy-edit).
  • I might be entirely missing it, but is there any mention of his silvery body color?—spookywillowwtalk 00:13, 14 March 2023 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:28, 13 July 2023 (UTC)