Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ozzik Sturn

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Ozzik Sturn

• Nominated by: Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 23:34, 27 January 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Wait, let's be civil!

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 23:34, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
2. A most dangerous game. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 00:51, 3 February 2009 (UTC)

   Yaquez 12:34, 3 February 2009 (UTC) (Single issue voter)

3. Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:31, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
4. This is one of the best things you've written, Tranner. Great work. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 15:07, 4 February 2009 (UTC)
5. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:40, 6 February 2009 (UTC)
6. Looks good! The body is clear and concise. Gethralkin 00:03, 7 February 2009 (UTC)
7. Cull Tremayne 02:39, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:10, 7 February 2009 (UTC)

Oppose

1. Soresu
   • Sex and race should be in intro
     • Done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:27, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
   • IIRC, Wookiees are hostile to Starkiller too during his mission to destroy the tractor pins. If so, you need say that Wookiees were also killed by him along with the stormtroopers. SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 07:10, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
     • Wookiees are not hostile to Starkiller; you as the player can kill them, but they don't try to kill you. As a matter of fact, they try to help you. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 14:27, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
       • I must have killed them for fun without realizing they weren't enemies :P. They're like animals, and I slaughtered them like animals! SoresuMakashi^{(Everything I tell you is a lie)} 23:34, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
         • Need to scrutinize the grammar. For example, "Starkiller fought his way to the skyhook's mooring structure and begun removing the tractor pins…" is grammatically incorrect. It would be written either, "and had begun", or "and began". Gethralkin 18:27, 6 February 2009 (UTC)

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