- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Orrimaarko
- Nominated by: -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 01:27, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(6 Inqs/0 Users/6 Total)
Support
Thefourdotelipsis 08:23, 29 November 2008 (UTC)- Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:55, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
- Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:40, 8 December 2008 (UTC)
Cull Tremayne 05:54, 9 December 2008 (UTC)- Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:00, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
- Woohoo redundancy! -- Darth Culator (Talk) 16:29, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
Object
- Toprawa:
Who is "he" here? Orrimaarko or our Human friend? "Pulling out his miniature, double-barreled weapon, he felled the two scout troopers"- Addressed.
I believe he did graduate from the Academy, though I could be mistaken: "Orrimaarko was disgusted that Solo, a man who hadn't made it through the Imperial Academy"- I was going by EGtAS, but yeah, you're correct; I've reworded it accordingly.
How, specifically, did Heir dispel this theory? "but the release of Timothy Zahn's Heir to the Empire in 1991 dispelled that theory."- Specified.
I feel some kind of Rebellion information should be presented here, even if only as a BTS bit. Maybe some kind of time context can be given - 0 ABY - for some of his Alliance duties?- Added a BtS mention; not really sure what else I can do with it.
Please order the Source list by correct date.Toprawa and Ralltiir 01:24, 21 November 2008 (UTC)- Done. Thanks for the review. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:03, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
My one objection: Was that an AT-AT or AT-ST he brought down? P&T and bio disagree.- Whoops, fixed (it was obviously AT-ST, by the way, I'd like to someone take down an AT-AT with a GoPed :-P).
- I'd bet Kyle Katarn could find a way. ;) Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 16:00, 11 December 2008 (UTC)
- I'd bet Kyle Katarn could find a way. ;) Atarumaster88
- Whoops, fixed (it was obviously AT-ST, by the way, I'd like to someone take down an AT-AT with a GoPed :-P).
- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 02:26, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
- And yourself. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:24, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
Comments
- Is it possible to get an article for Nox? Chack Jadson (Talk) 02:10, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
- On top of that, according to the Ultimate Alien Anthology, Nox is actually a Dressellian. So, either way, I guess this sort of needs fixing. Cull Tremayne 02:31, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
- Well, GG12 establishes that he's Human, and him being a Dressellian wouldn't make any sense in the context. Is it in the example names bit in UAA that he's mentioned or is it established in the text itself? About Nox's redlink, I'm not really bothered creating a uninformative stub for the sake of it. If/when I feel like writing about him, I'll make it a decent article. ;-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 23:14, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
- On top of that, according to the Ultimate Alien Anthology, Nox is actually a Dressellian. So, either way, I guess this sort of needs fixing. Cull Tremayne 02:31, 10 December 2008 (UTC)
- Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:00, 11 December 2008 (UTC)