Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Ord Antalaha

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Ord Antalaha

  • Nominated by: Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 04:38, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: First planet nom, yay!

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Ord voting. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 14:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  2. L-8, check! Marvelous! --Imperialles 14:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote WookieeProject Ordnance/Regional Depots continues! Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 19:23, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 20:55, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
  5. More Xicerian goodness. Thefourdotelipsis 10:57, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
  6. JangFett (Talk) 03:15, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote "Major Imports: Plunder" = Win. -- Darth Culator (Talk) 01:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Object

  • One minor thing: in the Inhabitants section, first paragraph—could you give specific sources for the establishment and dissolution of the Rebel Alliance? The current reference doesn't list where the information is from. --Imperialles 09:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Ord Farlstendoiro
  • "Ord Antalaha's inhabitants numbered around 150,000, although the accuracy of this number was in question" I don't get it. Either it was so, or it wasn't. Maybe it should be reworded to say that 150,000 was an official census or an estimate by someone?
    • Heh, the source literally puts a question mark next to that number under the population listing in one of those little WEG planet infoboxes. I've reworded it to make the number sound less certain.
  • "any ships larger than a CR90 corvette" You mean width, lenght...? You could also provide a specific number for that (We know how wide is a CR90).
    • No clue, the source just says anything "bigger" so I'm not sure what numbers I could use.
  • "This is further reinforced by the planet's entry in The Complete Star Wars Encyclopedia." How is it reinforced? Does the Encyclopedia say that Ord Antalaha was discovered in 8 BBY, or that it was discovered soon after the end of the Clone Wars, or what?
    • Whoops, clarified.
  • Good job. Skippy Farlstendoiro 09:41, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
    • Thank you once again for the thorough review! Xicer9Atgar(Combadge) 14:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)