Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Odile Vaiken

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Odile Vaiken

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Very well done. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 03:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)
  2. Awesome job, Trayus.—Jedi Kasra (comlink) 01:34, December 19, 2010 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 16:31, December 19, 2010 (UTC)
    • FWIW, I found this to be a very "Tranner-y" character while I wrote the article. The type you seem to be drawn to :P Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 06:10, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
  4. 1358 (Talk) 05:43, December 22, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:30, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
  6. Excellent. Chack Jadson (Talk) 21:49, January 6, 2011 (UTC)
  7. JangFett (Talk) 21:50, January 6, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Xd1358
  • Since I'm not familiar with the source, this is more of a question rather than an objection. "The young man was tasked…" Can "young" be used here? Is there any indication of when he left Korriban? If he was like 10, and then traveled for twenty years, you really can't say he's young anymore when he got into the Dark Council.
    • Per this image, I assumed he would have still been relatively young when they discovered Dromund Kaas, but I suppose the term is relative. I've removed it. Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 22:55, December 21, 2010 (UTC)
  • "Records kept by the Sith Empire would later indicate that Vaiken himself slew a rabid terentatek on the sight were the capital building known as the Dromund Kaas citadel was built." Is it just me, or is this sentence a bit weird? Should there be "where" instead of "were"?
  • Otherwise looks good. 1358 (Talk) 19:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:58, January 6, 2011 (UTC)