Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/OOM-9/Legends

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OOM-9

  • Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:18, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Roger, roger.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 21:35, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Cull Tremayne 08:14, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
  3. QuiGonJinnThe ability to speak does not make you intelligent.Quigonheadshot 17:07, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 22:46, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote I have such a weakness for Galactic Battlegrounds. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:17, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote -- Darth Culator (Talk) 00:46, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

Object

  1. From Graestan the Cruel:
    • No manufacturer in the intro?
    • Not in the bio or characteristics, either?
    • Please explain why Sidious would want to undermine Valorum—what he stood to gain from it.
    • A bit of context for OOM-14; is he subordinate? What exactly does he command?
    • Context for YIN-762—what he is.
    • "Signal jammer" is used a few too many times close together. Can some alternatives be provided?
    • Graestan(Talk) 20:33, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
  2. Toprawa:
    • I'm confused, is this referring to Amidala or some local queen? If it's Amidala, please just specify Amidala outright: "following their queen's lead, offered little resistance"
    • I'm assuming we don't know who voiced him in the movie? Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:06, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
      • IMDB says Taylor Murphy played the battle droids, but since he was uncredited I can't confirm it anywhere official. Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:53, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • In the intro, you say he was created "just prior" to the Battle of Naboo. In the body, it says "some time before." There are different connotations there. Please decide which one is correct.
    • No other objections. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 03:16, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 09:44, 20 November 2008 (UTC)