Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nida Korsin

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Nida Korsin

• Nominated by: IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 03:37, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Got this one done in two days.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Menkooroo (talk) 23:53, November 6, 2012 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:44, November 13, 2012 (UTC)
3. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:40, November 22, 2012 (UTC)
4. Plagueis327 (talk) 01:07, December 4, 2012 (UTC)
5. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:58, December 12, 2012 (UTC)
6. 1358 ^(Talk) 23:18, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Captain Nida?

• Linking isn't that great throughout. Can you go through the entire article, using this and maybe all the links that have added to Seelah so far as a guide? Menkooroo (talk) 13:21, October 31, 2012 (UTC)
  • Done. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:50, October 31, 2012 (UTC)
• What's the plural of uvak? Our uvak article asserts uvaks, but this article pluralized it as just "uvak" a few times.
  • Its always been "uvak". Just like fish. :P
• Can you make it clear that she arrives at the battle on the back of an uvak? It currently says that she rushed to the Temple and jumped into the fray, which is a bit vague.
  • Done.
• "In a final stand, Korsin tried to throw Jariad off a precipice, but when he failed, Korsin did it for him, killing her brother." Should that first "Korsin" be Yaru?
  • Yup. Fixed.
• The sentences immediately following Yaru's death almost read more from Seelah's perspective than Nida's. There seem to be some things you can say about what Nida did while Seelah was sleeping, ie, getting Yaru's testament ratified by the three High Lords and then making her way to Seelah's bedside.
  • Done.
• Throw in Imperators's Grand Lord box and we'll call it a day. Menkooroo (talk) 01:21, November 5, 2012 (UTC)
  • Thrown in. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 23:43, November 6, 2012 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• The fact that she was Force-sensitive, which seems to be the case, should be mentioned somewhere.
  • Done.
• On a related note, is Sith training applicable to be linked somewhere? CC7567 ^(talk) 18:40, November 21, 2012 (UTC)
  • Already has been linked. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:09, November 22, 2012 (UTC)
    • Whoops, missed that. CC7567 ^(talk) 02:40, November 22, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 23:18, December 14, 2012 (UTC)

• I've made the Grand Lord navigation template available now. Imperators II^(Talk) 12:11, November 2, 2012 (UTC)
• I inserted a few paragraph breaks to break up the larger walls of text. Feel free to discuss. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 20:58, December 12, 2012 (UTC)