Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nichos Marr/Legends

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Nichos Marr

• Nominated by: QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:51, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: So, after nearly six months of procrastination, I've decided to finish up this one. Truly, my laziness knows no limits.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. To Encephalon and beyond! NaruHina ^Talk 20:21, March 2, 2011 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 23:12, March 21, 2011 (UTC)
3. Is he a man? Or is he... an astro-man? Menkooroo 00:47, March 31, 2011 (UTC)
4. Whatever he was, he was sure nailin that hot blonde with the legs :P—Tommy 9281 Saturday, May 21, 2011, 01:18 UTC
5. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:05, May 25, 2011 (UTC)
6. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:23, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Object

U.R.T.V

• Does COJ specifically say he's a Human? If not, source it to the EGC.
  • Yep, COJ says he's Human.
• If Marr never appears in COJ, why is the head quote attributed to him? If that was said by the droid, it should be removed.
  • As Luke remembers, that's what Marr said upon arriving at the Praxeum.
• Context on Palpy. NaruHina ^Talk 22:20, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
  • Umm…isn't "Emperor" enough of a context? QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 22:32, February 22, 2011 (UTC)
    • Emperor of what? NaruHina ^Talk 20:47, February 25, 2011 (UTC)
      • Of the Empire, obviously. Do we really have to spell it out? The article mentions both the Galactic Empire and the Emperor. I believe our readers are capable of connecting the dots. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 21:21, February 27, 2011 (UTC)
        • Hence it needs to read "Galactic Emperor." That's what I was getting at. NaruHina ^Talk 20:21, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Marrmalade

• Can you rewrite the end of the third paragraph, and the beginning of the fourth paragraph, in the bio? I'm a little uncomfortable with the fact that it was seemingly copied and pasted from the Entechment article. Also, a little bit of expansion on the entechment process (explicitly call it "entechment?") and what "essence" is wouldn't hurt (maybe also call it life energy?).
  • Actually, it was the other way around. Dangerdan copy-pasted this information from here to the entenchment article months after I'd originally written it. However, I've actually now discovered that my wording was factually incorrect, so I've changed it anyway.
    • My apologies for making an assumption. It didn't seem like something you'd do, but I looked at the edit history for entechment and assumed the worst. I definitely shouldn't have, though. Sorry, gov'na!
• I'd say the bit in Powers & Abilities about him getting the scar deserves a place in the bio.
  • Addressed.
• Are the sources unclear on precisely when Marr dies? Reading this article, I can't quite figure out if he died before, during, or after the entechment process. :/
  • Clarified, based on what I could understand myself.
• G-g-good job! :D Menkooroo 07:28, March 29, 2011 (UTC)
  • T-t-thanks! :DD QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 17:00, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Sorry for the lateness of this objection, but can it be mentioned in the Bts where he was first depicted? (And just to make sure, is my addition of the {{1stp}} tag in the right place in the Sources section?) That's definitely relevant to the article. I'll archive it after this is fixed. CC7567 ^(talk) 05:35, May 26, 2011 (UTC)
  • Yes, that's correct. Added the Bts bit. QuiGonJinn ^(Talk) 08:56, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 09:06, May 26, 2011 (UTC)

• In the future, please make sure to reload the native infobox form to the article—sometimes going with what's already in the article means that some fields will get left out. CC7567 ^(talk) 04:23, May 26, 2011 (UTC)