Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Neshtovar

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Neshtovar

  • Nominated by: IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 04:25, December 18, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: And another one bites the dust.

(4 Inqs/3 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. LT FTW! Plagueis327 (talk) 03:23, December 21, 2012 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Good article about a loser council. Menkooroo (talk) 04:01, February 17, 2013 (UTC)
  3. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 19:02, February 26, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 13:49, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote 1358 (Talk) 18:59, March 6, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Nice. Coruscantfan (Talk) 03:26, March 7, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:33, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object

I love Star Wars; my favourite book is Vision of the Future! What do you guys think?
  • I think Keshiri language would be a better candidate for the "religion" field of the infobox, as it covers more than just the Skyborn. Ditto for the pipelinks to "religion" in the article proper.
  • An objection inspired by Bob: Is it accurate to say that they ruled all of Kesh, or did they just rule Keshtah Minor? I'm also wondering if sentences like "so that they could bring news to the furthest corners of Kesh's far-flung landscape" are correct, or if they just brought news to the farthest corners of Keshtah Minor. Ditto sentences like "the Neshtovar led mapping expeditions around the coasts of Kesh" and "The Neshtovar also undertook expeditions beyond Kesh's coastlines" --- the coasts of Kesh, or of just the one continent? I think the entire article should be combed for these references, which I don't think are accurate.
    • Went through the article and fixed it.
  • High Councilor seems like a unique and important enough title to get its own article. I think that should actually be listed in the infobox as the Head of Government, too, rather than a specific person --- Izri Dazh presumably didn't lead them throughout their entire existence.
    • Done.
      • Not going to object over it, but I know there are some other articles to which you could add this link. ;) Its "What links here" is so lonely... Menkooroo (talk) 04:01, February 17, 2013 (UTC)
  • This objection isn't really related to this article, but: I added a link to Vaal family home, which you created last week to satisfy an objection to Tona Vaal --- however, Neshtovar and Tona Vaal are now the only articles that link to it. I think there are probably quite a few other Lost Tribe articles you've written that could link to it; can you go through them and see what you can do?
    • Linked it where it appears.
  • Grammar question: The intro states "The Neshtovar were the ruling council" while the body says "The Neshtovar was the ruling council." "Were" seems to be more correct, but "The Neshtovar was" is used at least one more time in the article body.
    • Fixed.
  • Keshiri language is exclusive to the infobox.
    • Fixed.
  • Is there a specific ocean that can be linked in the Zhari Vaal section, when his death by Nink is discussed?
    • Yup, linked.
  • "Ironically, Vaal's findings were partially as a result of Neshtovari help, as a sympathetic rider had volunteered to bring her samples from the Cetajan Mountains." This info seems to be missing from Adari's article. Can you add it? Menkooroo (talk) 13:10, February 15, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 16:33, March 7, 2013 (UTC)