Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Neeyutnee/Legends

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Neeyutnee

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 06:08, June 1, 2011 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: This one's short—I promise. "Procrastination" seems to be my favorite word nowadays.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:01, June 3, 2011 (UTC)
  2. Assuming Tranner's objection is addressed. Kilson(Let's have a chat) 21:35, June 7, 2011 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:41, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
  4. Teff 02:07, June 24, 2011 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Good job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:17, July 2, 2011 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Menkooroo 09:48, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Object

Moffship
  • Only one objection: "Neeyutnee became a politician using her talents of diplomacy and leadership." - Did she become a politician through her use of these talents, or did she become one because of/to use these talents?
  • Good work. Since I assume you'll be reading this after your vacation is over, I hope you had a good vacation. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 23:56, June 5, 2011 (UTC)
    • The thing is that I extrapolated a little with the talents thing; The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia lists her talents as diplomacy, legislative strategy, and leadership, and since she was a politician, I related her profession and her talents in that way. The point is that she was a politician who was skilled in those talents, so I made an adjustment to the wording so that it's hopefully clearer; I'll be happy to hear any further suggestions. Thanks, btw; the hotel I'm at right now happens to have a computer room, though the keyboard I'm using is maddeningly outdated and difficult to use. :P (And thanks, everyone, for reviewing and catching all of those stupid errors that I left. :/) CC7567 (talk) 19:31, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
      • Perfect. Now stop checking Wookieepedia and get back to your vacation. :p Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 20:41, June 8, 2011 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • Just one. The last paragraph in the BTS states that the article assumes the Clone Wars Encyclopedia's version of not carrying a weapon is correct, although the fact that she carries a blaster is included in the article proper. Should this not read that we're assuming the latter is correct? "Although The Clone Wars Character Encyclopedia stated that Neeyutnee did not carry any weapons,[2] her entry in the StarWars.com Databank maintained that she carried a royal blaster pistol.[1] This article therefore assumes that the former is correct." Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:05, July 2, 2011 (UTC)
    • Oops, yeah—missed that somehow. Thanks for the review. :) CC7567 (talk) 00:15, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 09:48, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

  • I will be out of town from June 2nd to the 11th, so if any objections are made while I'm gone, I will address them when I get back. CC7567 (talk) 06:08, June 1, 2011 (UTC)