Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nal Kenuun

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Nal Kenuun

• Nominated by: ToRsO bOy (talk) 06:16, March 24, 2013 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Existing GA, being upgraded to FA.

(6 Inqs/1 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:54, April 23, 2013 (UTC)
2. ~Savage 16:26, April 24, 2013 (UTC)
3. Cade Calrayn 03:03, May 11, 2013 (UTC)
4. IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:48, May 14, 2013 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 18:50, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
6. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:39, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
7. Excellent work, especially the P/T. Just a heads up that all variations of "Podracing" are generally capitalized in canon. (Sorry for the extra vote, also. Jang just beat me to it. :P ) Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 19:41, May 25, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Floyd

• Link for Kenuun's podracing team?
  • There wasn't any mention of Kenuun's podracing team. If he had one, it wasn't made available to Luke. All he had was Artoo, Leia, Han, X-7 and Threepio. --
• Same for the race?
  • Done
• "and X-7, the latter of whom the Rebels were unaware was actually an Imperial assassin secretly using the alias Tobin Elad," I think this should be reversed. This should be something like "and Tobin Elad, who was secretly the Imperial assassin X-7..."
  • Done
• As such, you should probably refer to him as Elad throughout the article. If you're writing this from Kenuun's POV, it's unlikely he knows of Elad's secret identity.
  • Done ToRsO bOy (talk) 02:31, April 4, 2013 (UTC)
• IFYLOFD ^{(Floyd's crib)} 00:25, March 25, 2013 (UTC)

Cav

• In order to prove his loyalty and earn the Rebel's trust, X-7 offered himself to Kenuun - why is X-7 trying to win their trust? Up until this point, there is no reason to think that the Rebels don't trust him as he is posing as Tobin.
  • Explaining why he needed to earn their trust would be too long, and will seem out of place with the article. Is it ok if I remove that line instead?
    • If it confuses the issue more, and there is no real need of it, then sure. However, a small mention of why X-7 was infiltrating the Alliance upon first mention would be appreciated.
      • Removed. And added this line on X-7's mention. who was secretly the Imperial assassin assassin X-7 tasked to assassinate Skywalker ToRsO bOy (talk) 23:46, April 12, 2013 (UTC)
• Are there article from Grunta's podracer and the podracer that Skywalker flew in the race?
  • Done
• BTS needs to be updated with his mention in the ERC.
  • Added, but I'm currently not sure if it's a direct or indirect mention. Would you happen to know anyone who has a copy of the ERC so I can confirm? ToRsO bOy (talk) 02:31, April 4, 2013 (UTC) - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 21:51, April 1, 2013 (UTC)
    • I'll check my copy and add information as appropriate. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 09:53, April 11, 2013 (UTC)
      • He's explicitly mentioned under the book's entry. - Sir Cavalier of One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:54, April 23, 2013 (UTC)

Cadeth

• "The datacard contained a set of secret financial accounts" - I think you mean it contained information on the accounts. Also, an article for the datacard? Cade Calrayn 20:16, April 30, 2013 (UTC)
  • Done! ToRsO bOy (talk) 01:58, May 11, 2013 (UTC)

Attack of the Clone

• Please provide some context on Haari Ikreme Beeerd in the P&T quote caption, as that's the only place that the character is mentioned.
  • Done.
• Any relevant images that can be added?
  • There's no photo anywhere on the novel. I don't feel like adding a podracer or krayt dragon photo would be ok.--ToRsO bOy (talk) 00:31, May 25, 2013 (UTC)
• Wow, I barely remember reading this as a GAN. Bizarre. CC7567 ^(talk) 19:37, May 14, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:39, May 25, 2013 (UTC)