Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nakirre

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The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Contents

  • 1 Nakirre
    • 1.1 (0 Inqs/0 Users/0 Total)
      • 1.1.1 Support
      • 1.1.2 Object
        • 1.1.2.1 CC-8
        • 1.1.2.2 Ziara
      • 1.1.3 Comments

Nakirre

  • Nominated by: Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:43, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I've spent so much time looking at this article, I don't even know what I'm staring at anymore.
  • Date Archived: 05:37, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 2119 words (297 introduction, 1761 body, 61 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

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Support

kilji kilji kilji kilji kilji BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 17:45, 27 April 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))

Object

CC-8
  • You've used the Chiss Ascendancy logo twice Commander Code-8 Hello There! 15:50, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Changed the first instance to an alternative emblem. So you're aware, the Expansionary Defense Fleet and the Ascendancy's emblems are identical. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 20:35, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
Ziara
  • preliminary objection: take another look at the BTS: no context or full name for Tom Hoeler, and there seems to be some punctuation/capitalization errors BloodOfIrizi Seventh Fleet (Syndicure) 04:03, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Seems like I fixed something there and messed it up. Fixed. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 11:47, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  • the mention of the Kilji overlords should be moved up to the first paragraph of the body
    • Not really, they approved Nakirre's decision to go to Zyzek and I don't mention Zyzek in that paragraph. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
  • I'd like to see some mention of Peace-sealing in the body—I feel it was a main reason that they Chiss didnt view the Kilji as a legitimate threat
    • Not really sure how that's relevant to Nakirre, but it's not just because of the sealing. Mentioned that the Whetstone could not even face a ruling family in the PT, will that suffice? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
  • review note: copy edit, feel free to revert any parts you deem necessary. Incredible work!
    • Thanks! Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • No image for the PT. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:46, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Recieved Discord takedown request.—spookywillowwtalk 05:36, 30 July 2023 (UTC)