Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Nakirre

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.

Nakirre

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 18:43, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I've spent so much time looking at this article, I don't even know what I'm staring at anymore.
• Date Archived: 05:37, 30 July 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 2119 words (297 introduction, 1761 body, 61 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

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Support

kilji kilji kilji kilji kilji BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 17:45, 27 April 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II^(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))

Object

CC-8

• You've used the Chiss Ascendancy logo twice Commander Code-8 ^{Hello There!} 15:50, 16 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Changed the first instance to an alternative emblem. So you're aware, the Expansionary Defense Fleet and the Ascendancy's emblems are identical. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:35, 16 April 2023 (UTC)

Ziara

• preliminary objection: take another look at the BTS: no context or full name for Tom Hoeler, and there seems to be some punctuation/capitalization errors BloodOfIrizi ^(Syndicure) 04:03, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Seems like I fixed something there and messed it up. Fixed. Samonic ^(Talk) 11:47, 23 April 2023 (UTC)
• the mention of the Kilji overlords should be moved up to the first paragraph of the body
  • Not really, they approved Nakirre's decision to go to Zyzek and I don't mention Zyzek in that paragraph. Samonic ^(Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
• I'd like to see some mention of Peace-sealing in the body—I feel it was a main reason that they Chiss didnt view the Kilji as a legitimate threat
  • Not really sure how that's relevant to Nakirre, but it's not just because of the sealing. Mentioned that the Whetstone could not even face a ruling family in the PT, will that suffice? Samonic ^(Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)
• review note: copy edit, feel free to revert any parts you deem necessary. Incredible work!
  • Thanks! Samonic ^(Talk) 07:49, 25 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• No image for the PT. Samonic ^(Talk) 18:46, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
• Recieved Discord takedown request.—spookywilloww^talk 05:36, 30 July 2023 (UTC)