Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Vetine

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Mission to Vetine

There needs to be a reference note beside the "Twenty days after the Battle of Endor" in the prelude; that information is not given in SE III. Also, I added a link but then removed it as I decided to tell you here instead: a page for the "Jedi Temple traning ground," (name confirmed in the "The Wrong Jedi" episode guide, I believe in the concept art gallery captions) which is where the tree resided, should be made. Cevan (talk) 16:10, October 31, 2015 (UTC)
- Ah, meant to include the reference for the date. Good call. As for the training ground, I've re-added the link and will create it shortly. That wasn't something you needed to remove so feel free to keep that sort of thing in pages in the future! - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 22:04, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
  - The page has been created. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 23:10, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

Since Luke wasn't aware there were two twigs until he actually got into the lab, could you change the wording earlier in the article to reflect this. At the moment the infobox lists retrieving specifically two at the objective and the beginning of the body does the same, which makes it seem like Luke planned on getting both. Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:01, November 1, 2015 (UTC)
- Made a change. How's that? - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 22:04, November 15, 2015 (UTC)
~~I realise now I should have made this objection on the Wretch of Tachyon article, but should the black site at the Wretch of Tachyon have a separate article to the wretch itself?~~ Ayrehead02 (talk) 16:01, November 1, 2015 (UTC)
- That's a good question, and it's one I considered when creating the pages. I don't know if the Wretch of Tayron is the black site, or if the black site is something located at the Wretch of Tayron. So until that's clarified I rolled it all into the Wretch of Tayron article. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 22:04, November 15, 2015 (UTC)

~~The Galactic Civil War is infobox-exclusive.~~
- Added. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 13:08, November 23, 2015 (UTC)
~~"breach Imperial encryption codes" Did he breach the codes or breach something with the codes?~~
- Clarified. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 13:08, November 23, 2015 (UTC)
~~How did Luke learn that the tree was there? Is that something that would go in the Prelude?~~ IFYLOFD ^(Talk) 05:12, November 23, 2015 (UTC)
- The comic doesn't say. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 13:08, November 23, 2015 (UTC)

On Floyd's objection above, should you should mention the tree being removed from the jedi temple when sidious took over in the prelude, rather than the mission itself? And can you say "luke learnt the location of the fragments of the tree" or something similar, even if we don't know HOW he found out? Manoof (talk) 02:23, May 15, 2016 (UTC)
- I don't think the Sidious information needs to be in the prelude. That really only needs to show what happened directly before this mission; that much historical prelude context seems excessive when it can otherwise be referenced in the rest of the text. As for the "Luke learned the location" part, he never actually references learning about it so while he obviously did at some point, I think the fact that they're going on the mission speaks for itself. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 04:40, May 15, 2016 (UTC)
~~Did Bey choose to retire from the alliance directly after the mission, or sometime after? Manoof (talk) 02:23, May 15, 2016 (UTC)~~
- The timeframe isn't provided. We just know she decides after the mission. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 04:40, May 15, 2016 (UTC)
~~The second line in the BTS seems redundant to the article and unnecessary to the section. Manoof (talk) 02:23, May 15, 2016 (UTC)~~
- The sentence gives context to the sentences that follow. - Brandon Rhea^(talk) 04:40, May 15, 2016 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 04:09, May 26, 2016 (UTC)