Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Rugosa

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Mission to Rugosa

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 20:21, 11 June 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Fresh as can be from the GAN.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total/INQCON 5)

Support

  1. Reviewed it when it was on the GA page. Kilson Likes PIE 04:24, 21 July 09 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 00:50, 28 July 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 14:41, 30 July 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Well done. Grand Moff Tranner Imperial Department of Military Research (Comlink) 18:40, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 04:19, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote—Tommy9281 Dark side Master SWGTCG (Talk) 01:42, 11 August 2009 (UTC)

Object

  1. Chack Attack:
    • I'd prefer you just call Thire by his nickname when you introduce the clones in the intro and then remove that "—" bit later on in the intro. Same in the body.
    • Your BTS is choppy, and seems to be just bits of info thrown together. Try to organize it a little better.
    • Solid work, though. This is the second coming of TOTJ! Chack Jadson (Talk) 12:07, 24 July 2009 (UTC)
      • Both addressed; thanks, Chack. :P CC7567 (talk) 01:37, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
  2. Alpheridies-wide famous pasta:
    • Other than Chack's objections, I only have one: There is no mention in the body under "The trial" about the timeframe to reach the king. Yoda says that he would arrive by nightfall, which is not even referenced in the body; but, if I recall correctly, Asajj has something to do with that deadline being imposed. It should be included in the text. — Fiolli {Alpheridies University ComNet} 17:38, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
      • Hmm. Well...as far as I can see, Yoda only stated that he would arrive by nightfall, but it wasn't directly part of the terms, and Ventress didn't place them there. Yes, a deadline would make more sense, but since it was Yoda who introduced that part of the competition, I can't add it in relation to Ventress. I've put it in as Yoda's statement, though. CC7567 (talk) 20:35, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
  3. Toprawa:
    • Minor objection. I'm not exactly sure what this sentence is saying. Can we be more clear and/or specify more directly? "The premiere featured the television network's record highest acclamation for a series premiere." Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:15, 4 August 2009 (UTC)
      • Bad attempt at word variation. Fixed. CC7567 (talk) 04:13, 4 August 2009 (UTC)

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