Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Mission to Prakith

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Mission to Prakith

  • Nomination by: —Tommy9281Dark Side Master TotG (Peace is a lie) 04:26, 21 January 2009 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: And so it is with this one as it has been with those that came before…minus the flowers ;)

(5 Inqs/2 Users/7 Total)

Support

  1. Darth Acheron123
  2. SoresuMakashi(Everything I tell you is a lie) 06:48, 31 January 2009 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 12:58, 2 March 2009 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:15, 10 March 2009 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote —Xwing328(Talk) 03:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Cavalier OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:27, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Good work. Toprawa and Ralltiir 05:37, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. Toprawa:
    • This introduction needs more concrete context. "Decades before" what? "Decades before, A'Sharad Hett, who would become Darth Krayt, Dark Lord of the Sith, had been captured by the extra-galactic Yuuzhan Vong species, and implanted with their Yorik-Kul slave seeds."
      • Addressed.
    • The article never really establishes clearly before this reference that Wyyrlok took the holocron. Please clarify explicitly in the previous section: "With Andeddu's holocron in hand"
      • Addressed.
    • I don't really know what this means. Can we say this in English? "duel on the battlefield of the mind" Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:46, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
      • Yeah, I think that phrase works. It's nice imagery, if anything. —Xwing328(Talk) 03:41, 7 April 2009 (UTC)
        • Well, what should I do here? One Inq says change it, another says it's good. Please advise on a proper course of action, thanks.—Tommy Dark side Master SWGTCG (Nine two eight one) 01:26, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
          • If it's unclear what it means, especially to an Inq who's read a lot of these, it should definitely be changed. It might be a nice phrase, but clarity should be the most important thing. - Lord Hydronium 02:01, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
            • Indeed. I don't think asking for a little tweaking for clarity is too much here, and for all the Inqing you don't do, Xwing, I think we can find more productive things to do with our time than ragging on other's objections. Toprawa and Ralltiir 03:48, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 05:37, 8 April 2009 (UTC)