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Meeka Reen
- Nominated by: JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 02:10, 30 May 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Let's Meek it Reen!
- Date Archived: 19:46, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1215 words (136 introduction, 1043 body, 36 behind the scenes)
- Word count at nomination time: 1216 words (136 introduction, 1044 body, 36 behind the scenes)
- WookieeProject (optional): WP:COMICS
(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)
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Support
- Samonic
10:19, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
- Fan26 (Talk) 00:35, 2 September 2022 (UTC)
(Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- OOM 224 (he/him) 21:22, 1 February 2023 (UTC))
UberSoldat93 (talk) 13:57, 18 November 2022 (UTC)
- D MCCG
(chat) 19:59, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
lovely OOM 224 (he/him) 17:38, 3 February 2023 (UTC)
LucaRoR
(Talk) 15:56, 7 February 2023 (UTC)
—spookywillowwtalk 17:57, 6 March 2023 (UTC)- NotBoop talk 19:43, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
Object
UberSoldat
With three decently-sized paragraphs in each section, surely you can fit two more images there.Run-on sentence: "Skywalker was surprised at her comment, for she had lost six of her men, but Reen felt that they had meant nothing, drawing attention to the fact that both Skywalker and Organa having survived the ordeal, allowing them to find the vault."Missing documentation on articles of clothing that I can see: belt, boots, headpiece, earrings, gloves.UberSoldat93(talk) 17:40, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
- All addressed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 00:09, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Luca
In the intro, you mention the "Eternity Crystal" without previously saying it's the same crystal that is used to control time. For extra clarity, I'd include the name of the crystal when you first mention it.- Good catch - changed to just crystal in that instance.
The blaster she used could go in "Equipment."- Added.
The fact that the crystal wasn't actually there should be documented, in my opinion.- Added.
Category:Pirates is redundant to Category:Meeka Reen's pirates.- So it is, fixed.
- (Review note) Please make sure to be ok with my copy-edit, and nice work! LucaRoR
(Talk) 09:51, 4 February 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks! JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 21:25, 5 February 2023 (UTC)
spookly
Jerne's context as specifically a planet is intro-exclusive.In most of the images in her imagecat, her jacket seems the same shade as her headband. If the headband is considered gold-colored, would the jacket be as well (rather than green)?—spookywillowwtalk 20:56, 4 March 2023 (UTC)- Both addressed. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 17:41, 6 March 2023 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:45, 6 March 2023 (UTC)