Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Marn Hierogryph

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Marn Hierogryph

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Thefourdotelipsis 08:17, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
2. "Confidence trickster."—Graestan ^{(This party's over)} 23:46, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
3. bah! Greyman^(Paratus) 17:36, 15 October 2007 (UTC)
4. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 18:12, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
5. I need a uniform like the one he has. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 02:00, 24 October 2007 (UTC)
6. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 23:26, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

1. From the bowling ball of Green Tentacle:
   • Source the infobox.
     • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Fugitive, paragraph 1: You mentioned that Marn suspected Zayne killed the Padawans but then the wanted sign appears without saying that that's what he was being accused of.
     • Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Fugitive, paragraph 2: "He intended to contact Vandrayk in the undercity and obtain a method of escape, but he told Carrick that they would be journeying to the dangerous Undercity." Is that first "undercity" right cause it doesn't seem to make sense?
     • Yes, that's a mistake. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Fugitive, paragraph 2: Last two sentences might fit in better after the second sentence since they seem related to it.
     • Ah, yes, much better. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Fugitive, paragraph 2: "Seeing that the Wookiee had let them off at the wrong stop, Hierogryph was able to convince the Vulkars that the Wookiee had sewn spice capsules into his cart harness." So...?
     • Elaborated. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Mandalorian Wars, paragraph 1: Explain the scam better. All it says is that the Republic personnel fled from Jarael disguised as a Jedi and some pyrotechnics.
     • Elaborated. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Little Bivoli, paragraph 2: And the "purpose of the Bivoli" would be?
     • Elaborated. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
   • Behind the scenes: Did he not first appear in Knights of the Old Republic 0? Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 22:16, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
     • See Sikon's excellent (IMO) KOTOR article for details. 0 was released in March, 1 in January. Thefourdotelipsis 04:45, 18 October 2007 (UTC)
2. Just a couple of minor things...
   • The Oroko isn't described much. Basically, the article says this ship comes out of nowhere and captures the Last Resort. Is it a Republic ship? Pirating ship? A little explanation would be nice if possible.
   • "low-gravity booster jets"? Where'd they come from?
   • There might well have been more, if my hand hadn't slipped, causing me to save the page ;). Very funny character. Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 01:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)

Comments

• Bam! Thefourdotelipsis 08:17, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
  • Not really an objection, but can that Quote page be cleaned up? Cull Tremayne 22:26, 14 October 2007 (UTC)
• What is the meaning of "confidence trickster", and is it supposed to be obvious? Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 03:54, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
  • Confidence trick. Basically, a con-man. But I prefer this term. Thefourdotelipsis 06:41, 17 October 2007 (UTC)
    • Now I laugh whenever I read that :). Good choice of wording ;). Hobbes15^{(Tiger Headquarters)} 01:53, 24 October 2007 (UTC)