Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Manaan/Legends

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Manaan

Support

1. --Doquis^{(HoloConference)} 04:32, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
2. Well, gee. .... 04:38, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
3. KEJ 08:31, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
4. Jinko 20:11, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
5. Gonk ^(Gonk!) 20:18, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
6. Although this is my least favorite world of all KotOR. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:46, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
7. Stake black ^msg 21:37, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
8. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 09:51, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
9. Kylekatarn 21:58, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
10. Lord Hydronium 23:44, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
11. Enochf 23:05, 17 April 2007 (UTC)
12. Kylekatarn 05:10, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

Oppose

• POV (Rule 4). Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 06:00, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Where?--Doquis^{(HoloConference)} 15:18, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
    • I think that's been sorted now. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:25, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
• File:Swoop.jpg is unsourced and any chance of a link to the source for File:ManaanWalls1319.jpg? Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:25, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done.--Doquis^{(HoloConference)} 20:45, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
• <One ref tag seems to be empty, and the article needs a spelling check. -- 04:38, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 22:37, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
  • There is no empty ref tag that I can see, and I am not sure if "needs a spell check" is a valid objection.--Shaelas^{(HoloConference)} 16:08, 9 April 2007 (UTC)
    • It is a valid objection. Proper formatting and all that. Or under "well-written" Atarumaster88 04:48, 13 April 2007 (UTC)
• Too many images. --Imp 18:46, 16 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Done.--Shaelas^{(Ahto High Court)} 22:26, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius - Wookieepedia:Inq/Manaan 23:40, 6 April 2007 (UTC)

• Let us hope this goes even better...--Doquis^{(HoloConference)} 04:32, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
• I did a semi-extensive generic clean-up of the article fixing things such as spelling and rewording anything I thought needing. Good enough, Ataru? - Jinko 20:13, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
  • Looks good. Excellent job everyone.Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 20:46, 4 April 2007 (UTC)
• The paragraph about Manaan being taken by and later entering the New Republic says it's from the NEC, but I've looked and can't find any mention of Manaan in that era. Is there a page number? - Lord Hydronium 04:57, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
  • I wondered about that too. I checked the NEC, and it is in there. Sort of. While the NEC does not mention Manaan directly, it covers Ackbar's conquest of Imperial worlds in the inner rim. However, I am still looking for mention of Manaan joining the New Republic. Perhaps that was implied too, but it is unlikely. Despite being conquered, I doubt that the Selkath would abandon their neutrality all together, and join the Republic.--Doquis^{(HoloConference)} 11:51, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
    • In that case, we should clarify the statement to remove any speculation. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 15:09, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
      • Done. How about now?--Shaelas^{(HoloConference)} 17:41, 5 April 2007 (UTC)
        • I'm still not sure if it should be included as taken by Ackbar if NEC doesn't explicitly say so. Better to say that it was possible or something. Atarumaster88 ^{(Audience Chamber)} 23:48, 6 April 2007 (UTC)
          • I removed the speculation. --Eyrezer 06:59, 10 April 2007 (UTC)

I raked the article for grammar and spelling errors. Feel free to check my changes. --School of Thrawn 101 16:17, 9 April 2007 (UTC)