- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Madam Rhoden
- Nominated by: Yrfeloran 17:09, 24 October 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Gold-digger and GA
(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)
Support
Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 06:06, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
- IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 20:00, 30 October 2008 (UTC)
This was such a weird comic. Better than the Ord Mantell one though. Cull Tremayne 02:56, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
Thefourdotelipsis 10:37, 20 November 2008 (UTC)
Chack Jadson (Talk) 22:37, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
Object
- IFYLOFD:
Several redlinks I think should be killed.- Not a valid objection (< 3) Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
- I apologize. A bit of a n00b at this. :)
- Not a valid objection (< 3) Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Why did the Green Forge want to shut Clode Rhoden's company down?- As noted in the intro, they're eco-terrorists, he's a mining magnate. Further explanation isn't really provided. Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Provide context on Saul Moegantz. Who is he?- done Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
- Good work. IFYLOFD (And now, young Skywalker, you will die.) 22:34, 28 October 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
Source or remove aquatic lifeform original research in BtS.- Done. I think someone else added that in the GA process Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Not a strict objection, but I'd cut the section titled "loose lips" and merge it into "Jedi complications." The quote doesn't add anything anyways. However, should you choose not to, please reword the section title—that is a strict objection. ;-)- Done Yrfeloran 06:00, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
- Otherwise, more or less clean. Props on making cornflakes and have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 03:36, 29 October 2008 (UTC)
Comment
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:59, 22 November 2008 (UTC)
- I kind of question using the word shik to describe Foahl. I know that's what Waverton calls him, but Tasty Taste confirmed that Podlong was a Givin, so shik is probably some derogatory insult that might border a little on the POV side since it's just Waverton's opinion. Other than that, cool choice, nice article. Cull Tremayne 02:56, 8 November 2008 (UTC)
- Not an objection but, since the BTS is so short, you could mention who drew her as well. Green Tentacle (Talk) 20:01, 11 November 2008 (UTC)