Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lux Bonteri/Legends

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Lux Bonteri

  • Nominated by: CC7567 (talk) 22:38, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: Even if you don't like his romances, he offers a valuable insight into the Separatists that I wish we'd get to see more.

(3 Inqs/5 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote I'm sure Jang protests. :P IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 02:25, December 25, 2012 (UTC)
  2. DjMack (talk) 20:46, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
  3. —Jedi Kasra ("Indeed.") 05:59, February 18, 2013 (UTC)
  4. Coruscantfan (Talk) 13:47, February 18, 2013 (UTC)
  5. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 21:42, February 19, 2013 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote goddammit I mean good work. :P JangFett (Talk) 04:54, February 22, 2013 (UTC)
  7. Ayrehead02 (talk) 20:47, February 27, 2013 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 12:33, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

Object

Cadeth
  • "Tano's admissions about the dishonorable conduct" - is admissions the right word here? It sounds like she's confessing something, which isn't true.
    • Adjusted.
  • "while installing a base" - installing? Do you mean "setting up" or something similar?
    • I don't believe it's necessarily a misuse of the word, since "install" can be used for equipment and machinery, but I've adjusted it for clarity.
  • Nothing else. Great work. Cade Calrayn GalacticRepublicEmblem-Traced-TORkit 18:34, February 14, 2013 (UTC)
    • Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 00:34, February 15, 2013 (UTC)
Cav
  • I get the reason for using "Bo-Katan" instead of "Kryze" since you already established Satine in the article, but can some mention of their familial relationship be added? - Sir Cavalier of OneFarStar(Squadron channel) 09:33, March 4, 2013 (UTC)
    • Added. Thanks for the review. CC7567 (talk) 17:18, March 6, 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 12:33, March 7, 2013 (UTC)

  • For the Barnburner. Also, Part Seven of my and Trayus's TCWProject: Politics! CC7567 (talk) 22:38, December 1, 2012 (UTC)
  • What's the reasoning for the Confederate character infobox? He's most certainly not a Confederate by the time A Friend in Need and the Onderon arc roll around, and by the end of Tipping Points he even announces his intended realignment with the Republic. Should he have a Republic infobox like Steela and Saw or a Bureaucrat box like Ramsis Dendup? Darth Trayus(Trayus Academy) 19:05, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
    • I was using the same reason for Roshti—he stated he was going to join the Republic at the end of the episode ("Escape from Kadavo" for Roshti, "Tipping Points" for Bonteri), but that hasn't yet been shown in the series. If you think intention is enough to have a Republic infobox, I'd be willing to change it; just was hesitant to draw a direct affiliation due to the lack of continuation of the story. CC7567 (talk) 19:12, January 30, 2013 (UTC)
      • Upon some rethinking, it's worth changing the infobox, at least, to the Republic one, since it works better than the Confederacy character infobox. I'm still a little hesitant to list the Republic/Republic Senate as an affiliation in the infobox, though, since it hasn't yet been shown where that's going to go. CC7567 (talk) 19:17, January 30, 2013 (UTC)