Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lushros Dofine/Legends

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Lushros Dofine

• Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 02:28, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Dude.

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 18:19, 14 November 2008 (UTC)
2. Chack Jadson ^(Talk) 13:21, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
3. Cull Tremayne 08:11, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
4. --Skippy Farlstendoiro 10:18, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
5. --Eyrezer 16:49, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
6. -- Darth Culator ^(Talk) 22:24, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Object

1. From the Chron-O-John of Green Tentacle:
   • The intro should probably mention that the turbolaser killed him.
     • Fixed.
   • "His calm demeanor helped him rise through the ranks of his society, although he earned of some of his fellow Neimoidians in the process." Earned what?
     • Ire. Fixed.
   • "…prompting Dofine to order his OOM pilot battle droid to magnetize, lest they fall to the front of the bridge. The pilots were able…" The droid(s) seems to switch from singular to plural there. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 20:11, 13 November 2008 (UTC)
     • Fixed. Gah, stupid mistakes all. Thefourdotelipsis 03:21, 14 November 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 22:28, 25 November 2008 (UTC)