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Lost Reef
- Nominated by: Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 09:48, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
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Support
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Floyd
- As with some of your previous articles, this could use a nice copyedit, since I know English isn't your first language.
- When was the Lost Reef sold? Even just giving the general timeframe, such as "In the Imperial era..." would be helpful.
- In the description, you need to give context to Saell-Terae.
- Re-check your linking, I'm seeing a number of omissions.
- Context on Thrawn in the description.
- Can we get an article for the military commander who created the statues, his species, and then the statues themselves?
- "The first known individual owner" This isn't really in-universe.
- Take care of these - especially the copyedit - and I'll give it another look. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:45, February 10, 2013 (UTC)
Comments
Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
Idle objections. 1358 (Talk) 09:54, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
CC7567 (talk) 15:32, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:27, March 3, 2013 (UTC)
—Cal Jedi(Personal Comm Channel) 16:13, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 16:41, March 5, 2013 (UTC)