Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lightside Explorer

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Lightside Explorer

(4 Inqs/5 Users/9 Total)

Support

  1. Jedi Kasra (comlink) 18:06, May 3, 2010 (UTC)
  2. -- 1358 (Talk) 12:26, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
  3. LtNOWIS 07:05, May 17, 2010 (UTC)
  4. Great job. Sorry I didn't come back sooner, but I suppose you still need a few Inq votes. Graestan(Talk) 21:26, May 27, 2010 (UTC)
  5. Will no one rid me of this turbulent TOTJ? Thefourdotelipsis 00:28, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:06, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 21:34, June 2, 2010 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Didn't see Tommy's review, so this vote is kinda unneeded. Oops. Chack Jadson (Talk) 01:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)
  9. Inqvote—Tommy 9281 04:48, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Object

Jedi Kasra

No categories?--Jedi Kasra (comlink) 06:47, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

  • Crap, lost them in the transition. Don't know how I didn't notice. Fixed. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:21, May 2, 2010 (UTC)
G-stan:

Too detailed about what went on at the hyperspace terminal. It's about the ship, not the people. Graestan(Talk) 05:01, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

  • Cut it down; I still left the basic gist of what happened. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 23:46, May 10, 2010 (UTC)
Toprawa
  • You could add simply the linked "navigation computer" to the appropriate field in the infobox
    • Addressed.
  • How is this, the last sentence of the intro, relevant to the Lightside Explorer? "The enforcers later returned, but were defeated again by Thon and Nomi Sunrider, now a Jedi trainee."
    • Removed.
  • Otherwise, nice job. Toprawa and Ralltiir 17:23, May 29, 2010 (UTC)#**Thanks for the review. IFYLOFD (Floyd's crib) 01:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC)
Green Tentacle
  • It's long enough for another image or two. Internal cockpit one might be good for one.
    • Addressed.
  • Ambria: "A-3DO opted to stay behind and spent his time repairing the Lightside Explorer's hatchway." The hatch was damaged during the previous attack, right? Say so.
    • Addressed.
  • Behind the scenes: "released over early 1993–late 1994" Should this be late 1993–early 1994? Green Tentacle (Talk) 19:48, June 1, 2010 (UTC)
Carlo and Tomasso
  • "Sunrider told A-3DO that he should take the Lightside Explorer and go to Andur's former Jedi Master, Chamma, and tell him everything that had happened..." The quote at the beginning of this section simply states that Nomi wanted 3D to take the ship back to her homeworld...nothing about Chamma. What's the deal?
    • The quote at the top of the section is from the audio, and Chamma is not mentioned in that adaptation.
  • The image you have in the Ambria section does not quite correspond. Please find a more relevant image, like the Explorer actually on Ambria.
    • Replaced.
  • I would also contact Redemption for better scans.
    • I have contacted him. Will tell you when this is addressed.
      • I trust that by the time this makes it to the main page, Red will have honored your request.—Tommy 9281 04:48, June 5, 2010 (UTC)
  • That's all folks.—Tommy 9281 14:55, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

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