Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Lee Skillen

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Lee Skillen

  • Nominated by: —spookywillowwtalk 21:24, 20 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: I wrote her mother and girlfriend, thought I'd swoop by and finish this off. Base of it was written by Zed quite some time ago, have done expansion, polishing, and cleanup. It's the curious intersection of a lot of the projects I'm normally frequenting, which is a bonus!
  • Date Archived: 15:56, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
  • Final word count: 1303 words (241 introduction, 1003 body, 59 behind the scenes)
  • WookieeProject (optional): WP:NOVELSWP:GEWP:WOMENWP:PRIDE

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Support

You're not frequenting WP:CHISS? :( Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:26, 6 May 2023 (UTC) (Vote struck, reason: Per policy: Blocked user -- Imperators II(Talk) 10:05, 10 May 2023 (UTC))
  1. Inqvote Braha'tok enthusiast Hello there 19:53, 1 June 2023 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Lewisr (talk) 01:26, 27 June 2023 (UTC)
  3. Inqvote JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 23:42, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
  4. Rxxxxxxxxxx (talk) 20:27, 12 September 2023 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Nice work! TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 16:26, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
  6. Booply (talk) 15:52, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

Object

Samonic
  • "She also dealt with several Black Spire Outpost vendors such as Kat Saka, some of whom were annoyed at her due to Ohnaka's business practices." Is there any particular reason why you mention Saka here? Is she one of the vendors annoyed at Skillen due to Ohnaka's practices? If my assumption is correct, the intro should make this clear.
  • Does Star Wars: Timelines date A Crash of Fate's events?
  • Is Ohnaka Transport Solutions' office notable enough for a page? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 16:12, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
  • If she was born on an aquatic world, the infobox should probably mention that. Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 18:05, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
  • "Lee Skillen worked for Ohnaka Transport Solutions' Black Spire Outpost location (pictured)." She worked for the location? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 10:39, 22 April 2023 (UTC)
    • Addressed; was aiming for the usage of location such as 'retail location' but swapped it to office.—spookywillowwtalk 23:12, 26 April 2023 (UTC)
  • Most quote captions don't use a comma (eg. "Lee Skillen to Julen Rakab"); however, one of them uses one. I assume that one is an error? Samonic Signatureicon (Talk) 08:21, 4 May 2023 (UTC)
Lew
  • Is it worth including the bit about Lee saying she would speak to Hondo about a bonus for Delta? Or nah? Lewisr (talk) 20:30, 26 June 2023 (UTC)
Anil
  • Maybe it's just me, but I was slightly confused when I first read the beginning of "Stolen cards." I wasn't sure if Izal was trying to steal the card for an unrelated reason, or even if she was aware that Rakab also wanted it. Only after reading that Garsea was "pleased that Rakab had stolen the card," I figured she was trying to steal it at Rakab's behest but just didn't know he already did, though that portion can still use some tweaking, imo.
  • The BTS quote does imply the reason, but could you please clarify why Córdova considered Skillen's inclusion an Easter egg? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:14, 23 September 2023 (UTC)
    • Should be both tweaked.—spookywillowwtalk 23:07, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
      • I'm confused, isn't this about Lee being a Karkarodon, which originated in The Clone Wars series? TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 00:01, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
        • I didn't see anything specifically tying it to TCW the series. She says "But if you’re a longtime fan, you’ll see some Easter eggs and nods to the creatures and objects from Legends and Star Wars: Knights of the Old Republic, among other fan favorites." which seems to be the most we can say. The way she mentions the easte eggs, such as Phasma's armor, kinda indicates she's throwing in cool lore where she can from Legends as a whole (with the CW era comment aimed at 'if you haven't watched this time period's stuff, you'll still be fine' type of way).—spookywillowwtalk 01:10, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
          • Yeah, I don't think we can assume it's a TCW tie-in either. What I meant to say is that I'm not sure noting it was "one of several pulled from Legends" would be entirely accurate considering its TCW origin as well as other mentioned Easter eggs such as Kelleran Beq. The BTS quote is pretty straightforward about the Easter egg being the addition of a Karkarodon, but I believe it should also be documented in prose without getting into the species' origin at all. TanDivoInsignia-SenateMurders Anıl Şerifoğlu (talk) 02:49, 28 September 2023 (UTC)
            • Ah, misunderstood the original ask. Tweaked.—spookywillowwtalk 15:12, 28 September 2023 (UTC)

Comments

  • Doesn't specify homeworld—I know the species as a whole has a homeworld, but it's inconclusive if its hers too, since she traveled the galaxy.
  • Transport Solutions employees category is subcat of the Batuu residents category.—spookywillowwtalk 21:24, 20 March 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:55, 29 September 2023 (UTC)