- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Larry
- Nominated by: —Axinal Convocation Chamber 03:15, November 14, 2011 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: You asked for more featured articles. You got more Ewoks.
(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)
Support
- Now do Moe and Curly! ~Savage
15:38, November 16, 2011 (UTC) 
Toprawa and Ralltiir 23:17, December 1, 2011 (UTC)- Brilliantly silly. Menkooroo 20:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
- More Stooges!—Cal Jedi
(Personal Comm Channel) 22:59, January 10, 2012 (UTC) - CC7567 (talk) 06:56, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
- "One is a genius, the other's insane... and the other one's Larry!" -- Darth Culator (Talk) 15:03, January 17, 2012 (UTC)
Object
Prepare to be savaged…
Since his species name is based on a misidentification by the Kagles, should it go in quotes in the infobox?- Yeah, I wasn't sure how to handle that one, but that makes sense to me.
In the intro, it sounds like Larry crated one spirit, but the Kagles thought it was several. Can you clarify this? ~Savage 14:45, November 16, 2011 (UTC)- How's that? Thanks for the copy-edit and review!—Axinal Convocation Chamber 15:08, November 16, 2011 (UTC)
Larry
This is incredibly minor, but the intro states that he assumed the persona of spirits (plural) while the bio asserts spirit (singular). Which is correct?- I don't think it's ever clarified which he intended to assume; but the episode, before revealing Larry, implies multiple individuals, and the Kagles always referred to them as "Shrieks" in the plural, so I'll keep it as that.
I feel like the article doesn't really indicate what species Larry is. It presents the "Shrieks" as a kind of made-up evil spirit rather than a species, and the reader is left confused as a result. I think the bio (and possibly intro) should introduce him early-on as a member of a purple-furred , three-eyed species. Thoughts?- Sure, that makes sense. Would it make sense to you to pipelink purple-furred, three-eyed species as such?
- Yeah! I like it. Menkooroo 20:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Sure, that makes sense. Would it make sense to you to pipelink purple-furred, three-eyed species as such?
- Great work! Menkooroo 02:26, January 2, 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, Menk!—Axinal Convocation Chamber 02:18, January 8, 2012 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 21:40, January 17, 2012 (UTC)