Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kouhun/Legends

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Kouhun

  • Nominated by: Lord Hydronium 12:01, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: 1,047 1,117 Well over 1,000 words.

(6 Inqs/2 Users/8 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 23:04, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Ozzel 03:00, 9 July 2008 (UTC)
  3. Cool. I made a few minor expansions to this article in my first month here. Enochf 18:33, 17 July 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:01, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 17:19, 7 August 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote Graestan(Talk) 01:10, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
  7. Inqvote Nice work. --Imperialles 01:17, 10 August 2008 (UTC)
  8. Inqvote Chack Jadson (Talk) 13:38, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

  1. From the squadron briefing of Cavalier One
    • In the intro - the term "less fatal" is used to describe the Kouhun's tail sting, but in the main body it is refered to as non-lethal. "Less fatal" is confusing in this instance, and should be reworded.
      • Well, nonfatal is less fatal than fatal. :P I changed it. - Lord Hydronium 22:47, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
    • Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 22:43, 21 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. I've just found that kouhun appear in Portrait of the Artist as a Young Rodian from the Living Force. I'm going to write an article for the adventure itself, so I will take care of that red link, but there is probably a small paragraph that can come from the adventure. --Eyrezer 21:30, 1 July 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • "the result of escaped kouhuns from assassins," Reword.
    • "They sometimes used the ability to dye a kouhun by coloring it with the dominant color of the environment that it would infiltrate." Reword please.
    • Otherwise a clean nom. Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 19:49, 8 July 2008 (UTC)
  4. From the other desk of Chack Jadson:
    • "...almost all mammalian species, which in most intelligent species created symptoms resembling a heart attack or another natural manner of death." I think you should change this a bit. First you say mammals were vulnerable, and then you use all species. Chack Jadson (Talk) 13:20, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
      • I hope the "and" I added clears up that it's two separate ideas being talked about. - Lord Hydronium 01:46, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 14:15, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

  • "Centipedelike" is, in fact, a canon description. - Lord Hydronium 12:01, 21 June 2008 (UTC)