- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kolatill
- Nominated by: Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 11:09, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Still DarkStryder, but a planet nom for a change.
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Support
More planet articles. Toprawa and Ralltiir 14:43, 2 September 2008 (UTC)- Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:45, 3 September 2008 (UTC)
- Graestan(Talk) 14:16, 4 September 2008 (UTC)
Flawless and comprehensive. A pleasure to read. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:46, 8 September 2008 (UTC)- -- Darth Culator (Talk) 03:50, 10 September 2008 (UTC)
Oppose
- Toprawa:
In the infobox, can we specify what "Basic" language they spoke? Galactic Basic Standard? Imperial Basic?- I've changed it to Galactic Standard Basic - I'm basing this on the fact that it is an Outer Rim planet. If this seems like too much speculation, I can delete the entry altogether since I am basing it on the distress call sent out by the government which is in recognisable language.
- This is acceptable. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- I've changed it to Galactic Standard Basic - I'm basing this on the fact that it is an Outer Rim planet. If this seems like too much speculation, I can delete the entry altogether since I am basing it on the distress call sent out by the government which is in recognisable language.
I would like to see something added to the "Locations" section detailing the other cities that are mentioned to exist around the planet, as well as any notable terrain, mountains, etc., that may be relevant.Toprawa and Ralltiir 19:15, 30 August 2008 (UTC)- Unfortunately, Domaz is the only named city or feature on the planet. I could add "various other cities", "agricultural settlements" and "resource-rich mountains" to the Locations section if you want, however.
- Yes, I think that would be a good addition. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Added. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 07:45, 2 September 2008 (UTC)
- Yes, I think that would be a good addition. Toprawa and Ralltiir 21:27, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
- Unfortunately, Domaz is the only named city or feature on the planet. I could add "various other cities", "agricultural settlements" and "resource-rich mountains" to the Locations section if you want, however.
There's some information exclusive to the infobox that I'd like to see detailed in the article:405 local days/year- Added.
Humans, Twi'leks, and Jarell found on the planet- Added.
Population of 400 million- Added.
Major importsToprawa and Ralltiir 19:29, 30 August 2008 (UTC)- Added. - Cavalier One(Squadron channel) 10:58, 1 September 2008 (UTC)
Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:24, 10 September 2008 (UTC)