Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Knowledge Bank

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Knowledge Bank

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. So it turns out there's a lot more to say about these clams than I expected. - Lord Hydronium 10:36, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
2. --Eyrezer 23:27, 18 July 2007 (UTC)
3. Green Tentacle ^(Talk) 10:11, 19 July 2007 (UTC)
4. Good sources, long...FA worthy, dude. Jediknight19bby ^{(Jedi High Council Chambers!)} 18:48, 20 July 2007 (UTC)
5. Gonk ^(Gonk!) 23:10, 21 July 2007 (UTC)
6. Darth Culator ^(Talk) 03:02, 23 July 2007 (UTC)

Object

From the desk of Ataru

• 2, Para 2, Line 4 and 5, Sentence should be reworded for conciseness and effect.
• 3, Para 3, Line 2: sentence doesn't read well.
• Comma errors throughout.
• Since we're including information on Tikkes's clam, perhaps the mollusk from Darksaber deserves a mention.
  • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating Day Atarumaster88 ^{(Talk page)} 17:02, 24 July 2007 (UTC)
    • First 3 addressed. Darthchristian ^(Hey!) 21:06, 25 July 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius 09:00, 27 July 2007 (UTC)

• What Fact File article was it mentioned in? Looks like it was #88 --Eyrezer 23:27, 18 July 2007 (UTC)