Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kilji

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Kilji

• Nominated by: Samonic ^(Talk) 20:26, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: I'm so sorry. I know some users can't forget the "fucking" Kiljis, so I'd like to help them remember them forever. More things to say? Uh, yes, "Kilji." :P
• Date Archived: 15:14, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1650 words (222 introduction, 1402 body, 26 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:ALIENS WP:CHISS WP:NOVELS

(3 Inqs/4 Users/7 Total)

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Support

1. Nice work. Only note I'd say is to try and avoid too many short sentences, which can lead to choppiness. JediMasterMacaroni^(Talk) 18:52, 3 April 2023 (UTC)
2. Impressive work! Go go Kilji! LucaRoR ^(Talk) 09:57, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
3. Ziara has been enlightened BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 16:54, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
4. Per Ziara. NBDani (they/them)^{Yeager's Repairs} 14:35, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
5. —spookywilloww^talk 14:43, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
6. NotBoop (talk) 14:48, 13 April 2023 (UTC)
7. AmazinglyCool (talk) 15:09, 13 April 2023 (UTC)

Object

Ziara will not be enlightenend

• you mention that Kilji were taller than Grysk's, but we don't know how tall Grysk's are. I'm not sure on precedent, but it seems kind of strange to compare their biology to another species whose biology we also don't know
  • Jixtus is much shorter than Nakirre. Addressed following our Discord discussion. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:50, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
• and peace-sealing plating to cover their starships' weaponry. this reads off that they always used peace sealing - it would be noteworthy that they could peace seal their ships
  • Honestly, I see no issue. This isn't saying that they always used peace-sealing, this is saying that the Kiljis used peace-sealing to cover their starships' weaponry. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:50, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
• context for Paccossh and Nikardun in the body BloodOfIrizi^(Syndicure) 21:44, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
  • That context is unnecessary. Crofyp's task force, Tildnis, and Vassal One (Anvil), to name a few, don't provide context for those species and they're all status articles. Samonic ^(Talk) 10:50, 8 April 2023 (UTC)

Comments

• Notes (I will be updating this section):
  • Didn't mention everything Nakirre did and summarized it because I don't think it's necessary. It's just complaining and complaining most of the time and talking with Jixtus about the Chiss and stuff.
  • Not sure if the "Kiljis in the galaxy" section is truly necessary. I appreciate any and all feedback. Samonic ^(Talk) 20:26, 9 March 2023 (UTC)
  • I asked two Wookieepedians if this article's paragraphs were too long, both stated that the paragraphs were fine. I also think they're fine. Samonic ^(Talk) 17:28, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
  • Note that we don't know what the Kilji homeland is. We only know it was the Kiljis' home. Samonic ^(Talk) 09:23, 15 March 2023 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:13, 13 April 2023 (UTC)