- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was successful. Please do not modify it.
Kalidor Crescent
- Nominated by: Green Tentacle (Talk) 00:52, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:
(6 Inqs/1 Users/7 Total)
Support
Graestan(Talk) 20:17, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
—Xwing328(Talk) 22:47, 9 November 2008 (UTC)
--Eyrezer 16:48, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
Cull Tremayne 07:34, 17 November 2008 (UTC)- QuiGonJinnThe ability to speak does not make you intelligent.
17:11, 17 November 2008 (UTC)
-- Darth Culator (Talk) 02:09, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
Yay for redundancy! Atarumaster88 (Talk page) 19:48, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
Object
- From the cockpit of Xwing328:
"However, many recipients later placed the award in a medal case rather than wear it." It seems more natural to say that "Many recipients stored the award in a metal case when not wearing it." Is this not just because the medal was worn only on formal occasions?- Reworded. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:08, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
With regard to Farr, wasn't there more than 90 individuals on Bright Hope, but only 90 were able to be saved by Zuckuss and co? The rest went on escape pods back to Hoth, hence the need for her return mission there. --Eyrezer 08:32, 15 November 2008 (UTC)- I was going by her rather lacking Databank entry. I'll dig out my copy of Tales of the Bounty Hunters and expand it a little. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:08, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
- Done. Green Tentacle (Talk) 15:43, 16 November 2008 (UTC)
- I was going by her rather lacking Databank entry. I'll dig out my copy of Tales of the Bounty Hunters and expand it a little. Green Tentacle (Talk) 14:08, 15 November 2008 (UTC)
- From the desk of Atarumaster88
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The bird's accurate aerial maneuvers represented the standards " What does it mean by "accurate" aerial maneuvers? "is T-65 X-wing starfighter was hit by an Imperial weapons emplacement, killing Porkins instantly" Unless your source says otherwise, I would contend that Porkins was not killed instantly.BtS seems like it could use buffed a little. I could be wrong.- Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88
(Talk page) 03:28, 19 November 2008 (UTC)
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Comments
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 19:51, 19 November 2008 (UTC)