Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Kai Justiss

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Kai Justiss

  • Nominated by: Thefourdotelipsis 10:40, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  • Nomination comments: (toots horn loudly)

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

  1. Inqvote -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 17:14, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Inqvote Greyman(Talk) 01:36, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. For great Justiss! -- Ozzel 02:17, 20 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. Inqvote I don't think this guy's known personality does the character justiss. *Cackle* Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 13:54, 24 June 2008 (UTC)
  5. Inqvote Lord Hydronium 05:37, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
  6. Inqvote I seriously thought that was a woman in the infobox picture. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

Oppose

    • Ackbar says:
      • "The Count insisted that he was no monster hell bent on the destruction of the Jedi." -- This looks a bit informal, and doesn't read well, IMHO.
        • Yah, fixed.
      • "The name was coined by Corroney and Justiss." -- The world just imploded. :-P I would've fixed it myself, but I'm not sure who "Justiss" is meant to be.
        • Hmm. I'm doing this a lot these days, which is a huge worry. Fixed. Thefourdotelipsis 14:11, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
        • Good work. Interesting character, interesting article. -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 11:59, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  2. Three more little things:
    • I'd like a bit more context for the Battle of Geonosis, something like what I've done on Voolvif Monn/Pablo-Jill.
      • Hmm, well, on Monn at least, your info is a touch inaccurate: Kenobi's the one that sends out the distress signal. Still, good idea, I've added it now.
        • Bah. Fixed now.
    • Also, for the very end of the bio, you should clarify that Boushh, Zuckuss and Breela (as well as several other hunters), actually engaged Justiss in combat, and that he killed many of them, etc. As it's written at present, it just says Crimson Nova sent the bounty hunters after them.
      • Not positive that the image tells us that he killed anyone, but I've added some context there.
        • True, but you know what I mean. :-P Good work.
    • Also, though these aren't objections per se, I'd like to see an image added to the BtS, since we have plenty of them and he's an image-centric character, and also perhaps a quote from Joe Correney's blog in the BtS. Again, good work. :-) -- AdmirableAckbar (Talk) 14:42, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
      • Added a quote, but in terms of an image I'd really like a picture of Chung or of Trevas' drawing of Justiss...but I can't seem to find either at the moment. Thefourdotelipsis 15:41, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
  3. From the desk of Atarumaster88
    • A bit of context on Drongar in the body would be nice.
      • Thing is, this is like...over a year before MedStar. I'm not sure that we know just what's happening there in 21 BBY...I could be mistaken though.
        • The only thing I can recommend is that you take a hasty peek at the NEC. I don't have it on my desk atm, but that's the only other source I can think of. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 15:56, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
    • A hair more context on the whole Geonosis thing would be good also. It doesn't quite make entire sense if one hasn't seen Episode II as much as most of us have. Lucky them, eh?
      • Added a fraction, lemme know if it needs more.
    • Nothing else on P&T. :-(
      • This man seriously just...cameos. A lot. :P No discernible personality really...you're lucky to get that much.
    • Have a Super Terrific Friendly Un-frustrating day. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Talk page) 14:53, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
  4. Toprawa:
    • You would probably do well here to very briefly explain the blood feud, or however you want to classify it, between Trandoshans and Wookiees:
      • Could you clarify, please? Your colon seems to indicate that you have more to say. :P Thefourdotelipsis 10:06, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
        • Oh, whoops. Somewhere around here, "but nevertheless informed Justiss that Lonarr had come to Kashyyyk from Dosha, and that he employed Trandoshans to guard his Temporary Droids warehouse," a mention describing the Wookiee/Trandoshan feud would do nice to supplement the significance behind employing the Trandoshans. Toprawa and Ralltiir 15:13, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
    • Please give a brief descriptor for Sora Bulq: "Count Dooku boarded the craft, flanked by Sora Bulq"
      • Done.
    • Can we supplement this with specific names of who demonstrated this trait alternatively? "Justiss, unlike some,"
      • Also done.
    • Is there nothing that could be added to a Powers and Abilities section?
      • I'm afraid not. What little there is I've placed in the P&T.
    • Your BTS claims that his role as a Jedi Watchman is non-canon, yet he is categorized as such. Is this appropriate? Toprawa and Ralltiir 00:01, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
      • A vestige from the old article. It's gone. Thefourdotelipsis 10:06, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 15:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)

  • The full citation tags, with images, look odd in citation #5, where you actually write out sentences. -LtNOWIS 15:14, 6 June 2008 (UTC)