- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.
Jorj Car'das's fortress
- Nominated by: Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 09:49, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Nomination comments:The word count is actually only 990 now, but the first time someone even breathes the word "context" it is over a 1000, so I just save myself and everybody else the trouble of a failed GAnom and directly try for a FA...
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- Not sure if I should sofix these but there needs to be a conjecture template and a 1st appearance template.
- Oops! I knew I was missing something essential here...--Dionne Jinn (Something to say?) 10:44, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
- Context, yes you see it, context, for Karrde, 3PO and that other guy.
- Context for Exocron in the description
- Context for Car'das as well, in both the intro and body.
- The second sentance in the third paragraph for the description should be broken up as it runs on a lot.
- Context for Caamas.
- Little bit more context for Grodin Tierce's clone
- I'm pretty sure the histroy section could be expanded, a lot of stuff's in the description section which should definitely be in there.
- Context, fairly commonly needed here :P for Scum and Villainy.
- Also did a small copy edit which you should check out. Good writing. Commander Code-8 G'day, mate 10:11, February 5, 2013 (UTC)
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Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)
Idle objections. 1358 (Talk) 23:54, March 1, 2013 (UTC)- CC7567 (talk) 02:54, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
- Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 02:55, March 2, 2013 (UTC)
Green Tentacle (Talk) 17:28, March 3, 2013 (UTC)- —Cal Jedi (Personal Comm Channel) 16:12, March 5, 2013 (UTC)
