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Jobin
- Nominated by: Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:31, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: "The Emperor has made a critical error…"
- Date Archived: 08:09, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
- Final word count: 1991 words (289 introduction, 1506 body, 196 behind the scenes)
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Support
Ayrehead02 (talk) 09:45, 26 March 2023 (UTC)- —spookywillowwtalk 02:38, 11 May 2023 (UTC)
- Wonder if they will canonise him in Andor S2 Lewisr (talk) 21:57, 9 July 2023 (UTC)
- Tomotron
Sith Council 11:00, 13 July 2023 (UTC) - UberSoldat93 (talk) 11:49, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
- SkiffGuardCaptain (talk) 04:06, 20 July 2023 (UTC)
- LucaRoR (Talk) 08:08, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
Object
Ayrehead
The first sentence of the bio should be reworded since it isn't currently clear that "his father" refers to Jobin's father and not Mon Mothma's since you haven't established Mothma's pronouns. If you switch the father to be mentioned first that'd be one way to fix the issue.Ayrehead02 (talk) 12:16, 21 March 2023 (UTC)- Done Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:40, 26 March 2023 (UTC)
Uber
You have a duplicate reference in the last Biography paragraph.BTS has space for an image e.g. cover.UberSoldat93 (talk) 12:35, 14 July 2023 (UTC)
- Both addressed. Commander Code-8 Hello There! 09:34, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
Comments
- So at the start of the comic the rebel troopers are distinguished by their headbands, but these lose consistency towards the end and I certainly can't tell which troopers survived or not Commander Code-8 Hello There! 07:31, 17 March 2023 (UTC)
Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 08:08, 21 July 2023 (UTC)