Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jelok

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Jelok

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 10:13, November 10, 2011 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Enough sitting around! I will finish DarkStryder! Starting now! Maybe.

(4 Inqs/2 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
2. This story was so much better before the CSWE attempted to clarify things. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 01:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)
3. JangFett ^(Talk) 19:51, December 28, 2011 (UTC)
4. —Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
5. CC7567 ^(talk) 06:51, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
6. Menkooroo 01:05, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Object

Toprawa

• I think we could probably at least leave a redlink for this injured technician: "resulting in the wounding of a technician..."
• Possibly this one too, if we can discern he's a different character: "The remaining members of MS-133—Doctors Brunou and Theda, Solla Deremot, two troopers and a technician" Toprawa and Ralltiir 07:15, December 1, 2011 (UTC)
  • I don't think we can discern whether or not he is another technician or not. However, since the total number of technicians is around three, it is a possibility. I'll check over the source again, but I think in this case we generally assume that the technicians are separate since assuming the are the same is more speculation that assuming they are not, correct? - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:18, December 9, 2011 (UTC)
    • Right; I'm going to assume these are separate techs. The text is vague enough that speculating that they are the same isn't concrete. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 20:25, December 12, 2011 (UTC)
      • If it works for you, it works for me. :P Toprawa and Ralltiir 20:59, December 12, 2011 (UTC)

Jelok

• The article takes care to source the CSWE for the first Aaris-descendent attack, but it refs Artifact of Aaris for the second. Judging by the BTS explanation, shouldn't the second attack also be ref'd to the CSWE?
  • Quite right, it should. Goof catch.
• The body doesn't directly state that Jelok dies. Even if the sources doesn't give too many details about his death, can you make it explicit? Menkooroo 07:17, January 13, 2012 (UTC)
  • All that is known is that he didn't survive. Presumably he died around the shuttle explosion incident, but nothing confirms that. Only that Brunou and Deremot were the only survivors. I tried to make it a little more explicit by stating that the last few members of the team were the sole survivors at that point. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 23:03, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Comments

• Quick question: Any reason why you use the CSWE template for the Notes and references, but do not use it in the Sources?—Cal Jedi ^{(Personal Comm Channel)} 03:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)
  • I think a decision was made somewhere to format it like that and we've been using those guidelines for a while. Where it comes from escapes me at the moment, though. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 23:06, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:05, January 18, 2012 (UTC)