Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jarek Yeager's daughter

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Jarek Yeager's daughter

• Nominated by: Wok142 (talk) 22:06, 9 April 2025 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: After almost a dozen CANs-turned-GANs, this will be my first GAN-turned-FAN
• Date Archived: 05:28, 14 May 2025 (UTC)
• Final word count: 1101 words (109 introduction, 492 body, 500 behind the scenes)
• Word count at nomination time: 1078 words (113 introduction, 483 body, 482 behind the scenes)
• WookieeProject (optional): WP:Resistance Wookieepedia:WookieeProject Women

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Support votes

1. SorcererSupreme21 (talk) 03:29, 11 April 2025 (UTC)
2. Reviewed changes made since GAN.—spookywilloww^talk 17:10, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
3. Carrying vote over Lewisr (talk) 17:12, 15 April 2025 (UTC)
4. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 16:25, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
5. CometSmudge (talk) 16:57, 13 May 2025 (UTC)
6. Booply (talk) 20:16, 13 May 2025 (UTC)

Objections

spookly

• Just one final thing, and small at that. The Tam image (had a few people check with varying device sizes) cuts into the PT header. Though it doesn't break a text line, it's still unideal because it does cut into the line by a noticeable bit rather than being barely on the border. It would be better if that was either moved up to where Tam's first mention was, or arguably an image of Speedstar would fit much nicer on top of the second paragraph, given his heavy relevance to the daughter's introduction/Yeager's trauma. But either way so long as moved up somehow.—spookywilloww^talk 20:13, 14 April 2025 (UTC)
  • Agreed. Swapped in a photo of Marcus and moved it up. Wok142 (talk) 09:00, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

Tommy

• I think the intro may need tweaking slightly. I think my issue is that "the daughter's uncle and Yeager's brother, Marcus Speedstar, was also participating in the race" is introduced as something of an afterthought, when of course Speedstar was the actual cause of her death. I recommend introducing Yeager and Speedstar simultaneously when introducing the race and taking it from there.
  • Reworked per your suggestion. Wok142 (talk) 04:56, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
• "she told her that even if she did not realize it" - it isn't 100% clear which pronoun if referring to whom in this sentence. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 08:47, 11 May 2025 (UTC)
  • I see what you mean. How's that now? Wok142 (talk) 04:56, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
    • Tweaked slightly to remove a similar issue in the prior sentence, hopefully that looks good to you. Tommy-Macaroni (he/they) 16:25, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
      • Thanks for that, looks good. Wok142 (talk) 18:35, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Comet

• Castilon is exclusive to the intro CometSmudge (talk) 20:23, 12 May 2025 (UTC)
  • Added to body. Wok142 (talk) 22:06, 12 May 2025 (UTC)

Comments

Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 20:16, 13 May 2025 (UTC)