Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jaius Yorub

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Jaius Yorub

• Nominated by: Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 14:22, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
• Nomination comments: Guest nom for WP:LE

(5 Inqs/1 Users/6 Total)

Support

1. Graestan^(Talk) 22:24, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
2. AdmiralNick22 13:42, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
3. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 11:17, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
4. Grunny ^(Talk) 00:43, 20 April 2009 (UTC)
5. — Fiolli ^{{Alpheridies University ComNet}} 00:59, 21 April 2009 (UTC)
6. Thefourdotelipsis 01:08, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Graestan the Merciless:
   • You should be more explicit about Yorub's self-sacrifice in the intro.
     • Explicitified.
   • The image thumbnails are a bit too small and my myopia can't be playing into the fact that I can't see what's going on in at least one.
     • I tweaked two images (the fleet one and the explosion). How's that?
   • Mentioning that Dac was the Mon Cal homeworld wouldn't hurt.
     • Mentioned.
   • "It was estimated" – I'd specify who made the estimate.
     • Specified. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 13:07, 6 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Graestan^(Talk) 16:03, 5 April 2009 (UTC)
2. From the Moffship of Grand Moff Tranner:
   • GA Core Fleet should be listed as an affiliation in the infobox.
     • Added.
   • Seeing as there's only one redlink, could you create an article for the GA Core Fleet Commandos? Even a stub would be nice.
     • Grumbles about it not being part of the requirements but doing it anyway since he is a good chap and usually tries to fill in redlinks :P - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Well done. Grand Moff Tranner ^(Comlink) 16:00, 8 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Thanks. I may try an Imperial next and guest nom for Legacy and Ambition at the same time ... - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
3. I think you should mention that he is a Sullustan early on in the bio - first para... --Eyrezer 07:14, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
   • Added. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

Comments

• Approved as a Featured article by Inquisitorius 01:08, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

1. AdmiralNick22
   • Looks real nice Cav. I really enjoyed the section you wrote on his personality. AdmiralNick22 13:42, 11 April 2009 (UTC)
     • Thank you. I enjoyed writing this one. - Cavalier One^{(Squadron channel)} 11:08, 14 April 2009 (UTC)