Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Jai Maruk

The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was unsuccessful. Please do not modify it.

Jai Maruk

• Nominated by: ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:51, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
• Nomination comments:

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(Votes required: 3 Inq vote(s) required to reach minimum. Additional 4 user or 2 Inq votes required to pass.)

Support

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UberSoldat

• Article can benefit from images (e.g. Druckenwell, Vjun etc.).
  • Added image of Ventress instead. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
    • The first section can get one too, there is plenty of space. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Added photo of Vjun since it's more tied in to him.ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:51, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
        • I was thinking you were going to add something with more height, but the current image is fine. Now it looks like you can put in another one next to the third paragraph. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:00, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
          • Added Scout's photo. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:25, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
• Audiobook should be investigated for an appearance.
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
• It appears Star Wars: Battle for the Republic should have {{1stp}} next to it, and the BTS should be updated to reflect this.
  • Added on Appearances and BTS. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
• What is the nature of the character's appearance in Battle for the Republic? UberSoldat93 (talk) 19:57, 6 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Not sure if what I added is what you meant. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
    • Yeah that's fine. I'm just a little confused by this: "The game also displays a small avatar of the hero within the unit on the lower left corner." Did you mean to say "within the heads-up display" here? UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Not really a heads up display, more of like the unit box his image and name is enveloped in. I've remove the phrase since it'll take too long to explain the whole thing. ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:51, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
• Based on the game image, I think you can deduce his skin color and maybe his hair too. UberSoldat93 (talk) 16:05, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 16:51, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
    • These are now missing from the infobox. UberSoldat93 (talk) 17:00, 13 December 2020 (UTC)
      • Oh right, forgot about that box. Added. ToRsO bOy (talk) 17:08, 13 December 2020 (UTC)

Fred strikes back

• Yay for more Legends writers! For starters, the images in the body can be larger. MasterFred(talk) 06:49, 14 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Images enlarged. :) ToRsO bOy (talk) 02:55, 16 January 2021 (UTC)
    • Oh wow, that's too large. Also, all images should use "thumb" and have a caption. The image of Tallisibeth is formatted properly, though it could still be shrunk a tad. MasterFred(talk) 19:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
      • Didn't notice the thumb for the first picture disappeared. Added it back. And removed 40px from the other 2 images. ToRsO bOy (talk) 12:53, 24 January 2021 (UTC)
• In the intro, there is no need to state that he "wielded a sky blue lightsaber." I think it's more important to offer some minor context for the Clone Wars instead right there.
  • Removed and added context to the Clone Wars. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:19, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
• Be mindful of tense and linking. I made some fixes in the intro, which you can find here. MasterFred(talk) 09:04, 29 January 2021 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the correction. ToRsO bOy (talk) 15:19, 13 February 2021 (UTC)
• "her apparent lack of the Force..." Is that really how the source describes it, or is it more accurately a lack of connection to the Force or Force-sensitivity?
• No need to mention the CSWE entry and TERC mention in the Bts' first paragraph. We don't restate the Appearances and Sources sections in the prose anymore.
• How did you determine the proper way to handle the contradictions mentioned in the Bts? This might be worth noting for the reader. MasterFred(talk) 23:46, 23 February 2021 (UTC)

Macaroni

• Please implement {{CSWECite}} in your references. JediMasterMacaroni(Talk) 18:34, 25 February 2021 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Inq only)

1. Unaddressed objections from Fred over 2 weeks old. Tommy-Macaroni 08:05, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
2. Toprawa and Ralltiir (talk) 18:06, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
3. MasterFred(talk) 19:10, 10 March 2021 (UTC)