Wookieepedia:Featured article nominations/Isolder

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Isolder

Support

  1. StarNeptuneTalk to me! 17:44, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
  2. .... 05:45, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
  3. Cull Tremayne 20:02, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
  4. Green Tentacle (Talk) 09:29, 1 February 2007 (UTC)
  5. EAGLES610 15:09, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
  6. The "walking headache" himself! Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 21:36, 3 February 2007 (UTC)
  7. Lord Hydronium 22:54, 16 February 2007 (UTC)
  8. Jacen 04:23, 8 March 2007 (UTC)

Object

  • The dialogue is unsourced. Green Tentacle (Talk) 18:37, 30 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Dialogue sourced Cull Tremayne 04:32, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
  • In the section A political marriage proposal, could "but was defeated in this task by his mother and her agents." be expanded a little? How did they defeat him? Also, I think the opening paragraph in The search for Han and Leia is still a little vague. When did Isolder discover that Han and Leia had fled to Dathomir? How did he find out? When did Ta'a Chume dispatch the Navy? Why did she do this? Did Isolder tell Ta'a Chume to dispatch the Navy to Dathomir? Cull Tremayne 04:32, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
  • In line with the new rules, this article needs to cite its sources. QuentinGeorge 06:21, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Needs more pictures that say something other than this is Isolder. Starwarsrulez 18:10, 13 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Needs more quotes. I'd be happy to strike this if it turns out there isn't suitable ones, but I'm sure there must be. --Eyrezer 04:02, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
    • I've added a few but there is still about 4 or 5 sections without quotes. --Eyrezer 04:43, 21 February 2007 (UTC)
      • Per the new FA rules, not having quotes is not an objectionable matter, so I struck your objection. Atarumaster88 Jedi Order (Audience Chamber) 17:38, 27 February 2007 (UTC)
  • Also I think an equipment-type section would be good, analogous to that on Zuckuss, detailing his ships. --Eyrezer 04:13, 21 February 2007 (UTC)

Comments

Approved by Inquisitorius - Wookieepedia:Inq/Isolder 00:34, 12 February 2007 (UTC)

  • It took me long enough, but I think I finally got it up to FA standard. StarNeptuneTalk to me! 17:44, 29 January 2007 (UTC)
  • A really good article, just a small section is too vague and leaves the reader with unanswered questions. Cull Tremayne 04:32, 31 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Is there a good close-up pic for the infobox? --Eyrezer 03:52, 21 February 2007 (UTC)