- The following discussion is preserved as an archive of a Featured article nomination that was withdrawn. Please do not modify it.
Irizi'in'daro
- Nominated by: Snips777 (talk) 20:21, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
- Nomination comments: Canon page for Irizi'in'daro
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Vergence
- Welcome to the FAN! Here are some initial objections:
Referencing should be removed from the intro.- Needs an equipment section and could probably use as "skills and abilities" section
- I know there aren't any images of Ziinda herself, but there are images of related subjects, like the CDF logo, that could be added.
- You should be able to add dates for the battles. VergenceScatter (talk) 20:49, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
Samonic
- Welcome! You have done a nice work. Although I have noticed a few things so far.
- Intro should be expanded to cover what the biography covers.
- Could use some quotes. Maybe one for each section if available. (In the case of Crisis at Hoxim, there are many available)
- Can "Early live" be expanded? If it can, it should. It should also be renamed to "Early life." Samonic
(Ah, yes. The negotiator.) 21:11, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
UberSoldat
- Article is severely lacking detail for one of the main characters in a trilogy of novels. UberSoldat93
(talk) 02:42, 25 February 2022 (UTC)
Amazingly
- Quick little objection, in your BTS it says that the character was first mentioned in a SW.com Article and source the article. If I'm not mistaken, I think that you should make a sources section with the article and use the {{1stm}} template. AmazinglyCool
(talk) 13:05, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
